
6/14/2009 c2
2WakeUpAndSmellTheIrony
You my dear have a real talent for the macabre style of writing! I am impressed, shocked, appalled, and enthralled by this story. You should most definitely continue with this one. the only thing I would say is make them longer! I don't want unnecessary detail but some more of the good stuff would make me one happy phan girl. I love having a dark Erik and you made him so! So many authors just go by the fluff man they see Gerard portray and forget the man Erik truly was!
Thanks!
Wakeupandsmelltheirony

You my dear have a real talent for the macabre style of writing! I am impressed, shocked, appalled, and enthralled by this story. You should most definitely continue with this one. the only thing I would say is make them longer! I don't want unnecessary detail but some more of the good stuff would make me one happy phan girl. I love having a dark Erik and you made him so! So many authors just go by the fluff man they see Gerard portray and forget the man Erik truly was!
Thanks!
Wakeupandsmelltheirony
3/3/2009 c1
3xKilljoyBekah
Wow this was kind of creepy. In a good way of course. It was fantastic.
☺Hikaru☺

Wow this was kind of creepy. In a good way of course. It was fantastic.
☺Hikaru☺
2/27/2009 c1
3ChocolateHappy
Very interesting, I like it! I can't wait to see how it turns out, keep writing!

Very interesting, I like it! I can't wait to see how it turns out, keep writing!