8/17/2009 c1 18Meruhen Wind
Whoa. At least my question got answered?

Yeah, Apollo was pretty vicious with his slighted love affairs, so I'm not really surprised to see Zeus's reaction myself. ._.

Um, anachronistically speaking, I'm not sure Greek women used a blouse as much as a tunic? But that's just me being a history dork.

The story was very well-written. It'd be wrong to say I enjoyed the story (what with it being dark and depressing, and whatnot), but you *did* accomplish what you set out to do: I was reminded of-and felt the pain of-the no-win situation that always trapped women in myths.

It's even more tragic that the Girl (I like her namelessness; it gives her an even bigger feeling of anonymity and helplessness) can't do anything to get her wish: she will never "have a normal life" because dealing with the gods is never quite that simple.

Gah. Angst and everything aside (or included, I suppose), I really liked this.

3/2/2009 c1 1Prospera3
Interesting take on a myth.

I'd be interested in seeing what the others thought about the destruction. As well as Hera's thought's. After all it sounds as thought she is being merciful when I'm not entirely sure she is.