for Adulterium7/25/2022 c4 TechnoAngelprincess
I found this story really good so far, you have enough back story to give a basic story line about the characters without giving too much and the drama that is developing. I can't wait to read more.
I found this story really good so far, you have enough back story to give a basic story line about the characters without giving too much and the drama that is developing. I can't wait to read more.
12/8/2015 c4 
1I-Love-Trunks1
Poor Gaara. It's sad what happened to Naruto as well. I love the pairing Naruto/Gaara! Could you please make Gaara bottom? I love bottom Gaara! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it.
1I-Love-Trunks1Poor Gaara. It's sad what happened to Naruto as well. I love the pairing Naruto/Gaara! Could you please make Gaara bottom? I love bottom Gaara! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it.
12/7/2014 c4 9BuzyIzzy
I really like the rewrite of this story! Before, yes, Gaara WAS too much of a pussy. It was a detail that frustrated me. There seems to be more back story too, and I love it. Keep on and thanks for fanfiction like this and LFFB
9BuzyIzzyI really like the rewrite of this story! Before, yes, Gaara WAS too much of a pussy. It was a detail that frustrated me. There seems to be more back story too, and I love it. Keep on and thanks for fanfiction like this and LFFB
8/6/2014 c4 Guest
when will the next chapter be out? i can't wait!
when will the next chapter be out? i can't wait!
5/28/2014 c4 1janiyah
i like both gaara but wish some old gaara will come and kick neji ass love this story update :)
1janiyahi like both gaara but wish some old gaara will come and kick neji ass love this story update :)
4/12/2014 c4 Germanlady1
Oh my god ! Gaara is so sweet and I like him really much. Hope you bring up the next Chapter soon. ;) Germanlady1
Oh my god ! Gaara is so sweet and I like him really much. Hope you bring up the next Chapter soon. ;) Germanlady1
3/17/2014 c4 88Lopithecus
I really like this story and intrigues me greatly. I didn't read the original version but I do think Gaara is believable.
Great story and can't wait to see what happens next. :)
88LopithecusI really like this story and intrigues me greatly. I didn't read the original version but I do think Gaara is believable.
Great story and can't wait to see what happens next. :)
12/10/2013 c4 2AnnoyedOften
I shall review per request!
I will start this off saying I love how perfectly you portrayed Naruto as a dad. You made him the cute, fun loving daddy that we all know he would be but still puts his fricking foot down when he is done with your shat(Sakura).
Now Gaara. Gaara is a different story. I love that he is rebellious but still realistically frightened in a sense to have to triple think near ever decision out of habit. My heart goes out to my baby, and I am having a hard time not throwing my phone/laptop in pure anger when Neji is even mentioned in this story so great job on your part 3 But I just wish something else good would come Gaara's way sooner than later so that I don't have to slowly decay with each word of this fanfic.
Sorry if I'm remembering the story wrong, I haven't read this a month or so and the details escape me and felt the need to review this heart-pounding fanfic((Favorite part was the telephone scene at Gaara's house. My heart couldn't rest.))
Dang I'm rambling but I do wish you would write/post another chapter of this soon?
2AnnoyedOftenI shall review per request!
I will start this off saying I love how perfectly you portrayed Naruto as a dad. You made him the cute, fun loving daddy that we all know he would be but still puts his fricking foot down when he is done with your shat(Sakura).
Now Gaara. Gaara is a different story. I love that he is rebellious but still realistically frightened in a sense to have to triple think near ever decision out of habit. My heart goes out to my baby, and I am having a hard time not throwing my phone/laptop in pure anger when Neji is even mentioned in this story so great job on your part 3 But I just wish something else good would come Gaara's way sooner than later so that I don't have to slowly decay with each word of this fanfic.
Sorry if I'm remembering the story wrong, I haven't read this a month or so and the details escape me and felt the need to review this heart-pounding fanfic((Favorite part was the telephone scene at Gaara's house. My heart couldn't rest.))
Dang I'm rambling but I do wish you would write/post another chapter of this soon?
11/3/2013 c4 shigeru-sama
OMG!
This story is absolutely brilliant, much too brilliant to be left incomplete. I beg you to finish this piece, I want to know more about Neji and Gaara's past, I want to see Naruto's reaction to... to well everything about Gaara and his life. I'm just so engrossed by this story and can't wait until you decide to update again! :3
XOXO
shigeru-sama
OMG!
This story is absolutely brilliant, much too brilliant to be left incomplete. I beg you to finish this piece, I want to know more about Neji and Gaara's past, I want to see Naruto's reaction to... to well everything about Gaara and his life. I'm just so engrossed by this story and can't wait until you decide to update again! :3
XOXO
shigeru-sama
8/8/2013 c4 Z0371
Yes! Well, at least one of your new fans is taking it well :D i really love your style and you are just ahh the best! Sorry if i seem creepy for reading all your stories and reviewing :/
Yes! Well, at least one of your new fans is taking it well :D i really love your style and you are just ahh the best! Sorry if i seem creepy for reading all your stories and reviewing :/
6/9/2013 c4 WildRose431
This is such a great story, and the rewrite makes it ton better. Gaara's not such a sissy now, he's much more Gaara. The whole whore things interesting too! Love the rewrite, improved and already good story :D
This is such a great story, and the rewrite makes it ton better. Gaara's not such a sissy now, he's much more Gaara. The whole whore things interesting too! Love the rewrite, improved and already good story :D