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3/16 c20 1theprofessionalreaduh
sheesh
6/22/2017 c1 Guest
Stupid ass story. Naruto is to weak
11/13/2015 c20 Meirai
Nicely done.
Another that belongs in pictures and movies to be seen by all and to famed and loved.
8/24/2014 c20 Gabyviolet
só vou te dizer isso uma unica vez não sou de fazer comentários mas dessa vez eu acho plausível.

A sua história é boa pra Cara*%&$ bem você me entendeu kkkkkk
to seguindo e indicando.
5/21/2014 c20 Deanna4Prezzy
Ahhhh classic. I remember when I first read this on deviantart! Love this fic, I hope it always stays up!
5/7/2014 c20 8Professor Donger
sequel
4/16/2014 c1 nova zodiac
Is there a second book to this if so can you tell how to get it please :)
6/27/2013 c1 RinnyTheOrange
I like your story, but... where are the "..."? I mean when you use '...' the character is usually thinking NOT speaking -_-
3/22/2013 c20 4thestorymaker2
You made naruto too weak
3/13/2013 c20 Godschildtweety
Really. Good
3/2/2013 c14 Thule
I don't entirely know what it is, but when a girl gets desperate with me like this, it tugs at my heartstrings. Hard to resist at the point, hah, so I really enjoyed this chapter and it's lemon.
1/26/2013 c15 3chaos267
woah interesting but confusing as heck
1/25/2013 c20 Thule
Well done. I always enjoy an author who can write worth a damn. But really, you have a bit of an issue with keeping the reader up to date on the state of your enviroments.
On more than one occasion I read an update to the surroundings and was taken completely off guard by it and was forced to reimagine a bunch of scenes with the update, breaking the immersion.

Just a bit of constructive criticism to help you improve, but other than that, well done. I wish I could really enjoy these kinds of stories, but mild sociopaths like me are doomed to only luke-warm feelings.
1/17/2013 c10 Guest
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1/17/2013 c6 Guest
no problem
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