for Shock of the Lightning
18/7/2022 c5 luvnaruto
we're ALL LITERALLY begging you here, pllleeeaassseeee continue this AWESOME story!
we're ALL LITERALLY begging you here, pllleeeaassseeee continue this AWESOME story!
2/21/2021 c2 Ghost
Kinda like the uzumaki a surprise attack. eh?
Kinda like the uzumaki a surprise attack. eh?
2/15/2021 c5 Hyuga Tobirama
Really wish you contained this story. Well done on this shorty sorry it could have been something great
Really wish you contained this story. Well done on this shorty sorry it could have been something great
4/11/2020 c4 Guest
please update since it quarantine you have the time to do it
please update since it quarantine you have the time to do it
4/9/2020 c5 Guest
Don’t write any thing you don’t want to complete
Don’t write any thing you don’t want to complete
10/10/2018 c5 TsukuyoGintoki
I just want to let you know that I liked this so far. I liked that you didn't make him evil but he was extremely cold and blunt. I appreciated that because a lot of people just make him evil. Anyway, I liked what you wrote.
I just want to let you know that I liked this so far. I liked that you didn't make him evil but he was extremely cold and blunt. I appreciated that because a lot of people just make him evil. Anyway, I liked what you wrote.
10/5/2018 c5 X1AutumnLeaf
I loved this story so much and i wish this would continue but sadly its been abandoned. if some decides to pick this up i would so happy
I loved this story so much and i wish this would continue but sadly its been abandoned. if some decides to pick this up i would so happy
8/2/2018 c5 JustSomeRando
BUT IT WAS SO GOOD
BUT IT WAS SO GOOD
7/8/2018 c1 Guest
really fucking retarted
really fucking retarted