for It started with a wish5/4/2023 c1 Guest
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3/28/2015 c4 Guest
I like this story, but you haven't updated in four years and I'm beginning to become a bit impatient.
I like this story, but you haven't updated in four years and I'm beginning to become a bit impatient.
3/7/2014 c4 Guest
right more
right more
8/3/2011 c1 
12Suchan and Twelve
I like how you find it appropriate to bitch at me about spelling a character's name in a manner you dislike when your grammar, punctuation, sense of paragraph breaks, and god knows what else is atrocious.
If you rescind your remarks, I'll take mine back and I could proofread and edit your oneshot if you'd like. I'm appalled at your hypocrisy, but my sincerity in offer to help you with your piece is genuine. This story has potential. Let me know what you've chosen.
12Suchan and TwelveI like how you find it appropriate to bitch at me about spelling a character's name in a manner you dislike when your grammar, punctuation, sense of paragraph breaks, and god knows what else is atrocious.
If you rescind your remarks, I'll take mine back and I could proofread and edit your oneshot if you'd like. I'm appalled at your hypocrisy, but my sincerity in offer to help you with your piece is genuine. This story has potential. Let me know what you've chosen.
5/16/2009 c3 5Lyla Domae
I really like how you're going with the story so far. However, I hink you should try and make your chapters a bit longer so that you wouln't feel that guilty about not updating for so long and leaving your readers with a cliffhanger, or leaving them wondering what happens next. So then if you take so long without leaving readers satisfied, they won't wait for your updates and therefore won't review. Just don't give up on writing. Your story's really good so far. You've really captured Puck's true nature. Plus, it's pretty funny.
-Lyla
5Lyla DomaeI really like how you're going with the story so far. However, I hink you should try and make your chapters a bit longer so that you wouln't feel that guilty about not updating for so long and leaving your readers with a cliffhanger, or leaving them wondering what happens next. So then if you take so long without leaving readers satisfied, they won't wait for your updates and therefore won't review. Just don't give up on writing. Your story's really good so far. You've really captured Puck's true nature. Plus, it's pretty funny.
-Lyla
5/11/2009 c3 Julie Margaret
Ok this was awesome but you had a gramatical error: 'It was probably just uncle jake after another LATEI closed my eyes. Yeah that didn't really make any sense but other then that... AWESOME!
-alli303
Ok this was awesome but you had a gramatical error: 'It was probably just uncle jake after another LATEI closed my eyes. Yeah that didn't really make any sense but other then that... AWESOME!
-alli303