for Playing the Four Devils4/26 c6 Kristopherlobb
Just curious but was the character Hanone an original or were they from something like an anime /manga or a videogame or what? Or am I being dumb and the fact you called him an onigumo is saying he was based on Muso from Inuyasha seriously it's driving me nuts because I keep trying to find an image of him online using the name Hanone or seeing if onigumo is also the name of a type of yokai from Japanese folklore.
Just curious but was the character Hanone an original or were they from something like an anime /manga or a videogame or what? Or am I being dumb and the fact you called him an onigumo is saying he was based on Muso from Inuyasha seriously it's driving me nuts because I keep trying to find an image of him online using the name Hanone or seeing if onigumo is also the name of a type of yokai from Japanese folklore.
3/14 c5 shadowfanf
The final form omen in Pandora was basically a one shot AOE kill move Basically killed all enemies on the screen at any time
The final form omen in Pandora was basically a one shot AOE kill move Basically killed all enemies on the screen at any time
10/8/2023 c24 archangelazraelson
i hate to nitpick here i really do its a great story but morning is spelled like what i just put if your refering to a day. mourning the way your spelling it is to do with funerals loss of someone or someone greiving. just a note on that.
i hate to nitpick here i really do its a great story but morning is spelled like what i just put if your refering to a day. mourning the way your spelling it is to do with funerals loss of someone or someone greiving. just a note on that.
4/27/2023 c18 rageouss
ughhh.. so naruto is still 5"1.. ?no bloodline height adjustments? are you telling me anko, a grown woman is flirting with a boy barely reaching her tits? hell naw man
ughhh.. so naruto is still 5"1.. ?no bloodline height adjustments? are you telling me anko, a grown woman is flirting with a boy barely reaching her tits? hell naw man
2/9/2023 c21 Sora9979
LOL who would have thought Lee could be so evil with chakra I mean seriously using again genjutsu to literally mind f*** that poor girl and now she's probably going to be his girlfriend
LOL who would have thought Lee could be so evil with chakra I mean seriously using again genjutsu to literally mind f*** that poor girl and now she's probably going to be his girlfriend
12/20/2022 c19 rageouss
so why is that bitch anko sitting on her ass when naruto told her orochimaru was there?
so why is that bitch anko sitting on her ass when naruto told her orochimaru was there?
12/19/2022 c11 rageouss
the outburst in canon was cringe af, the outburst here was 100 times more cringe. the boy, in fact, has all the reason to be sad. he's a fucking civilian with a civilian mom and almost dead granfather; a single genin can walk into their home and kill them all, and they can do NOTHING about it. meanwhile he's got 100 bloodlines infused in him, even if every konoha nin attacks he'd still survive.
the outburst in canon was cringe af, the outburst here was 100 times more cringe. the boy, in fact, has all the reason to be sad. he's a fucking civilian with a civilian mom and almost dead granfather; a single genin can walk into their home and kill them all, and they can do NOTHING about it. meanwhile he's got 100 bloodlines infused in him, even if every konoha nin attacks he'd still survive.
10/6/2022 c1 rageouss
heh, can't help but laugh when I read the A/N at the end. Kishimoto limiting OP powers huh..
heh, can't help but laugh when I read the A/N at the end. Kishimoto limiting OP powers huh..
9/15/2022 c13 
1Weebstyle
Intro reminds me of the boondocks, if that was the reference then the people who are yelling in the reply’s are clowns
1WeebstyleIntro reminds me of the boondocks, if that was the reference then the people who are yelling in the reply’s are clowns
7/14/2022 c41 mauricemattis17
This is gotta be one of the dumbest shots I have ever seen, you basically made saskue a even more dick than cannon and them you just give him power to match Naruto nigga tf ?
This is gotta be one of the dumbest shots I have ever seen, you basically made saskue a even more dick than cannon and them you just give him power to match Naruto nigga tf ?
2/12/2022 c16 Guest
Here is my review/ advice. DON'T BITCH TO UR FANS ABOUT LAZY REVIEWS! It is a turn of to ur fans. Just be grateful that the even post will let you know that they liked it. Also my favorite part for this chapter is the part the kyubi talking about weed. That was just out of left field but I feel he would be that kind of bad influence lol.
Here is my review/ advice. DON'T BITCH TO UR FANS ABOUT LAZY REVIEWS! It is a turn of to ur fans. Just be grateful that the even post will let you know that they liked it. Also my favorite part for this chapter is the part the kyubi talking about weed. That was just out of left field but I feel he would be that kind of bad influence lol.
2/11/2022 c13 Guest
1. I'm a very similar kind of Christian when it comes to homosexuality/bisexuality. Fyi the Roman Catholics perverted a specific verse in the Bible when it was translated due to homophobia. If u actually translated properly the verse that thou shall not lay with another man would actually state thou shall not lay with a younger man. Which is talking about pedophilia.
2. The comment about Ronald Reagan makes u sound that a Illuminati conspiracy theorist. (Granted he was a mobster before he became the president so who knows)
3 Osama bin Laden was a unknown willing pawn. (He let his emotions cloud his decisions after the Bush administration provoked sympathizers in the committee 9/11. FYI that was caused by Bush being greedy and stealing oil. In short Afghani war was caused by the Bush administration refusing to stop stealing the oil before it broke into a war. Aka USA's leadership was the cause of that. Which is something I hoped would be a wake up call to stop my countries leadership from bullying others . Sadly they haven't.
4. U are 100% right that Jesus was more likely a person of color then Caucasian. Not guaranteed just more likely. There is something like a 6% chance of being Caucasian. Cuz that was about the amount of families that lived in that area at the time.
5. Why even bring politics into this under the opening part of the story for this chapter. If u want to talk about religion or politics make a story about that. Don't put them at front of ur story's cuz that is how I get hate mail lol.
6. Also so far loving story so far plz keep putting out chapters like this for whatever story you're working on now and you'll keep me reading!
1. I'm a very similar kind of Christian when it comes to homosexuality/bisexuality. Fyi the Roman Catholics perverted a specific verse in the Bible when it was translated due to homophobia. If u actually translated properly the verse that thou shall not lay with another man would actually state thou shall not lay with a younger man. Which is talking about pedophilia.
2. The comment about Ronald Reagan makes u sound that a Illuminati conspiracy theorist. (Granted he was a mobster before he became the president so who knows)
3 Osama bin Laden was a unknown willing pawn. (He let his emotions cloud his decisions after the Bush administration provoked sympathizers in the committee 9/11. FYI that was caused by Bush being greedy and stealing oil. In short Afghani war was caused by the Bush administration refusing to stop stealing the oil before it broke into a war. Aka USA's leadership was the cause of that. Which is something I hoped would be a wake up call to stop my countries leadership from bullying others . Sadly they haven't.
4. U are 100% right that Jesus was more likely a person of color then Caucasian. Not guaranteed just more likely. There is something like a 6% chance of being Caucasian. Cuz that was about the amount of families that lived in that area at the time.
5. Why even bring politics into this under the opening part of the story for this chapter. If u want to talk about religion or politics make a story about that. Don't put them at front of ur story's cuz that is how I get hate mail lol.
6. Also so far loving story so far plz keep putting out chapters like this for whatever story you're working on now and you'll keep me reading!