3/17/2009 c13 7montecristo709
nice dbz ending xD. I would just say T.F.O not spyro...kinda kills it. Anyways good chap. I might update today, due to the fact...well i got nothing to due other then listening to NFS music. Anyways update soons!
nice dbz ending xD. I would just say T.F.O not spyro...kinda kills it. Anyways good chap. I might update today, due to the fact...well i got nothing to due other then listening to NFS music. Anyways update soons!
3/13/2009 c11 montecristo709
the answer is so simple. Yes they will. Y do i have this feeling that Ryuu and Darla are meant for one another? xD
the answer is so simple. Yes they will. Y do i have this feeling that Ryuu and Darla are meant for one another? xD
3/9/2009 c9 montecristo709
that is so nice for her...but if DL Mark finds out about what happened to her parents...i think u no. *BOOM*
that is so nice for her...but if DL Mark finds out about what happened to her parents...i think u no. *BOOM*
3/7/2009 c7 montecristo709
well this chap was nice. U shoudl really try and make chaps that are like 2K or 3k words. Heck i do it no problem. Which reminds me, since it is such a beautiful day out here in NYC, i feel like updating.
well this chap was nice. U shoudl really try and make chaps that are like 2K or 3k words. Heck i do it no problem. Which reminds me, since it is such a beautiful day out here in NYC, i feel like updating.
3/5/2009 c6 montecristo709
nice man...i think i no just who the guy is...but i do not know who the girl is. Update soon
nice man...i think i no just who the guy is...but i do not know who the girl is. Update soon
3/3/2009 c5 montecristo709
yah...u should change the rating to M now. Just a scene with Vice eating up a dragon is considered M. Anyways good chap. One question...u gonna add a couple of other ppl to the quest? Anyways...see yas!
yah...u should change the rating to M now. Just a scene with Vice eating up a dragon is considered M. Anyways good chap. One question...u gonna add a couple of other ppl to the quest? Anyways...see yas!
3/3/2009 c4 montecristo709
...EW! I never really expected one of your guys to go nuts and be like Atreus (xD) Anyways...good job on the story so far. Sucks that i am the only one reviewing! (Review PPL! I no u want t. U cannot resit!) Try making u;r chapters a little longer..say...roguhly 1,700. Anyways...time to update mine!
...EW! I never really expected one of your guys to go nuts and be like Atreus (xD) Anyways...good job on the story so far. Sucks that i am the only one reviewing! (Review PPL! I no u want t. U cannot resit!) Try making u;r chapters a little longer..say...roguhly 1,700. Anyways...time to update mine!
3/2/2009 c3 montecristo709
okay...i'm less hyper now. See three updates in one day aint bad. xD DK Mark is right, since the last one u made was in December? So that is like 2 months. But no biggy. An update is an update. Well...cyas!
okay...i'm less hyper now. See three updates in one day aint bad. xD DK Mark is right, since the last one u made was in December? So that is like 2 months. But no biggy. An update is an update. Well...cyas!
3/2/2009 c1 montecristo709
wow...thinking about making a 100K story for once? Cuz this sure is worth it!
wow...thinking about making a 100K story for once? Cuz this sure is worth it!