for Amaryllis1/19/2012 c6 Moonpaw
You should do a Falling Smoke sequel about his life in WaterTribe
You should do a Falling Smoke sequel about his life in WaterTribe
1/2/2012 c6 x.Sunspirit.x
About a year ago, I read Falling Smoke and loved it. It was already long completed by then, though so I don't think I ever reviewed. I just re-read Falling Smoke yesterday, and I loved it even more than I already did. So I decided to finally read this story, which I had never gotten to before. Normally I wouldn't review because this story is already completed, but I felt the need to review after I read the last few chapters. Because I cried. And not just like the "Oh that's sad, sniffle." kind of thing. Like I actually full out cried for about five minutes straight. And I want to thank you for writing this amazing story, as well as writing Falling Smoke. I truly adore them both. You are a fabulous author, and don't let anybody tell you otherwise. So thank you.
P.S. I also really like you reverse psychology fic.
P.P.S. I'm glad that I stayed up till 2:18 to read this, even though it's a school night. That was random =]
About a year ago, I read Falling Smoke and loved it. It was already long completed by then, though so I don't think I ever reviewed. I just re-read Falling Smoke yesterday, and I loved it even more than I already did. So I decided to finally read this story, which I had never gotten to before. Normally I wouldn't review because this story is already completed, but I felt the need to review after I read the last few chapters. Because I cried. And not just like the "Oh that's sad, sniffle." kind of thing. Like I actually full out cried for about five minutes straight. And I want to thank you for writing this amazing story, as well as writing Falling Smoke. I truly adore them both. You are a fabulous author, and don't let anybody tell you otherwise. So thank you.
P.S. I also really like you reverse psychology fic.
P.P.S. I'm glad that I stayed up till 2:18 to read this, even though it's a school night. That was random =]
1/24/2011 c6 
2MyrtleFalls
*screams very, very loudly* It's over! I can't believe it! And then you stopped writing! It. Is. So. Sad. *sob* You're my fave author! JUST WRITE ANOTHER STORY! *sobbs because Moonstar probably won't write any more stories.*
2MyrtleFalls*screams very, very loudly* It's over! I can't believe it! And then you stopped writing! It. Is. So. Sad. *sob* You're my fave author! JUST WRITE ANOTHER STORY! *sobbs because Moonstar probably won't write any more stories.*
1/7/2010 c6 21Shiningheart of ThunderClan
*sniffles* Aw, poor Smokepaw... This made me love him even more than Falling Smoke did.
21Shiningheart of ThunderClan*sniffles* Aw, poor Smokepaw... This made me love him even more than Falling Smoke did.
12/25/2009 c6 2Aylen-Aussie
If you could ask him(and build a magical bridge back to the clans for him), do you think Smokepaw would ever want to return to Shadowclan? And if he said yes, what do you think he would think about Tawnypelt's kits? Hmm.. :0
2Aylen-AussieIf you could ask him(and build a magical bridge back to the clans for him), do you think Smokepaw would ever want to return to Shadowclan? And if he said yes, what do you think he would think about Tawnypelt's kits? Hmm.. :0
11/20/2009 c1 Notallergictodinosaurs
I decided to re-read your story, because I read something on the internet that reminded me of it!
And I finally found out why Rowanpaw's favourite flower is Amaryllis.. is it beccasue he's proud?
I decided to re-read your story, because I read something on the internet that reminded me of it!
And I finally found out why Rowanpaw's favourite flower is Amaryllis.. is it beccasue he's proud?
10/25/2009 c4 Shy Summer Wind
lol! Holden! Catcher in the Rye! (im very happy that i noticed this) haha!
poor Smokepaw
lol! Holden! Catcher in the Rye! (im very happy that i noticed this) haha!
poor Smokepaw
10/5/2009 c6 dawnfire2222
sad
sad
sad
i just want to cry
sad
sad
sad
i just want to cry
6/8/2009 c6 Allegra Kiwi Feather
Very nicely written ending. (: (As always ... Teehee. x]) As a writer, I could almost feel it... You writing it out, and the feelings and meaning behind every word. I got a strange connection... useful, and good with perception. Strange... xD Yes, the symbolism worked pretty nicely in your story, eh? I thought this chapter was a bit out there, if you get what I mean. Because it seems to be more of a third person than it normally does. (Or maybe that's just me, I dunno.) I like how smooth the ending was (of the chapter). The beginning events were a bit slow, actually. The warrior ceremony (Tawnypelt) and mum at the end was the high-point connection. x] That was my favorite part(s). Again, absolutely amazing work done! (:
Very nicely written ending. (: (As always ... Teehee. x]) As a writer, I could almost feel it... You writing it out, and the feelings and meaning behind every word. I got a strange connection... useful, and good with perception. Strange... xD Yes, the symbolism worked pretty nicely in your story, eh? I thought this chapter was a bit out there, if you get what I mean. Because it seems to be more of a third person than it normally does. (Or maybe that's just me, I dunno.) I like how smooth the ending was (of the chapter). The beginning events were a bit slow, actually. The warrior ceremony (Tawnypelt) and mum at the end was the high-point connection. x] That was my favorite part(s). Again, absolutely amazing work done! (:
6/4/2009 c6 6Icethroat21
I loved the story! I wished I had noticed it earlier...
But now that I'm done reading it, I'm off to read Falling Smoke AGAIN!
Both of these stories are so awesome!
I hope you write another warriors story soon! (especially since your stories are MUCH better than the third ACTUAL warriors series that was so crappy...)
I'm off to read Falling Smoke!
~Icy
6Icethroat21I loved the story! I wished I had noticed it earlier...
But now that I'm done reading it, I'm off to read Falling Smoke AGAIN!
Both of these stories are so awesome!
I hope you write another warriors story soon! (especially since your stories are MUCH better than the third ACTUAL warriors series that was so crappy...)
I'm off to read Falling Smoke!
~Icy