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8/10/2009 c1 5AprilRyn
I honestly don't know whether I liked or hated the chapter... Because I honestly couldn't make sense of it. I was so confused by the end of the passage, I was almost glad that was it. Please, I think it has potential, but it really needs to be organized (I hope you aren't too offended by my review, I was just so lost that I thought I should say something..)
3/13/2009 c1 1xSecret-Magicx
It's great! Oh and thanks for being the first to reveiw my story!
3/4/2009 c1 6chainmailbucket
It sounds like it has real potential! Very exciting. Warning, critic: However, it's a little smushed together. Perhaps you should get an editor?

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