for Hate12/18/2012 c1 
1TrinityKnight93
Not bad, this is very good at giving Dante some more character and some depth.
1TrinityKnight93Not bad, this is very good at giving Dante some more character and some depth.
3/18/2010 c1 7Shadow-of-a-Wolf
Bravo that's one nice story packed with so much hate u couldn't help but love it. Keep up the good work
7Shadow-of-a-WolfBravo that's one nice story packed with so much hate u couldn't help but love it. Keep up the good work
3/3/2009 c1 39Eric Draven201
You have done very well and for English not to be your first language, you grammar is okay. (whenever I speak outside of language people still look at me as if I'm stupid) It really took some courage to do it, because I certainly couldn't.
The only mistakes you have made were the tenses you used. So if something already happened, you should put a "d" or "ed" at the end of the word. If you would like any help with this, just let me know.
All in all, you have done a great job and you should keep up the good work.
39Eric Draven201You have done very well and for English not to be your first language, you grammar is okay. (whenever I speak outside of language people still look at me as if I'm stupid) It really took some courage to do it, because I certainly couldn't.
The only mistakes you have made were the tenses you used. So if something already happened, you should put a "d" or "ed" at the end of the word. If you would like any help with this, just let me know.
All in all, you have done a great job and you should keep up the good work.
3/3/2009 c1 1Frances Geira
Their are a few grammer mistakes, but to think that your not fluent in english, its pretty good. Although some words didnt fit where they were meant to, everything made sense.
I haven't pointed out your mistakes...but, if you want me to, I'd be obliged to do so. Just give me a nudge, and Ill tell...
But well done, since your not fluent in english :)
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1Frances GeiraTheir are a few grammer mistakes, but to think that your not fluent in english, its pretty good. Although some words didnt fit where they were meant to, everything made sense.
I haven't pointed out your mistakes...but, if you want me to, I'd be obliged to do so. Just give me a nudge, and Ill tell...
But well done, since your not fluent in english :)
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