for Shizru the great match maker4/10/2016 c9 JPQ11569
Dear author,
Please continue and finish your work.
It's a very nice plot though except for the grammar and spelling errors.
Good work.
Keep it up.
Dear author,
Please continue and finish your work.
It's a very nice plot though except for the grammar and spelling errors.
Good work.
Keep it up.
4/10/2016 c5 JPQ11569
What the...
What kind of chapter is this?!
Spelling and grammar is a mess!
The plot and story will be a waste if the author will not fix this...
What the...
What kind of chapter is this?!
Spelling and grammar is a mess!
The plot and story will be a waste if the author will not fix this...
2/23/2016 c9 Guest
Run for your lives!
The dead have risen to take back the lands.
JKing
Its good to see a fic once thought to be dead come back.
...after all these years im still a lurking, but one day I will make an account xD
Run for your lives!
The dead have risen to take back the lands.
JKing
Its good to see a fic once thought to be dead come back.
...after all these years im still a lurking, but one day I will make an account xD
2/22/2016 c5 Guest
LOTS and LOTS of errors! The plot is interesting, yes, but you have to work on your grammar, the spelling (gosh, the spelling!), and the right words to use. I'm guessing that English is not your first language but I think that is not an excuse to correct the mistakes visible in this fic.
LOTS and LOTS of errors! The plot is interesting, yes, but you have to work on your grammar, the spelling (gosh, the spelling!), and the right words to use. I'm guessing that English is not your first language but I think that is not an excuse to correct the mistakes visible in this fic.
12/27/2012 c8 M
You have pretty good story in here. But sorry, you have bad vocabulary and Grammar.
You have pretty good story in here. But sorry, you have bad vocabulary and Grammar.
11/17/2009 c8 Pochako
great story, Shizuru's finally accepted her feelings for Natsuki... she even says it outloud, wonder if Natsuki will be awake enough to hear what she said. Also, looks like Natsuki reciprocates the feelings, well she said Shizuru's name in her sleep anyway. Can't wait to see what happens next. thanks.
great story, Shizuru's finally accepted her feelings for Natsuki... she even says it outloud, wonder if Natsuki will be awake enough to hear what she said. Also, looks like Natsuki reciprocates the feelings, well she said Shizuru's name in her sleep anyway. Can't wait to see what happens next. thanks.
8/25/2009 c8 Bleeding Hopes
Thanks for the update. Nao's PO'd and Shizuru's falling in love. Can't wait for more.
Thanks for the update. Nao's PO'd and Shizuru's falling in love. Can't wait for more.
8/23/2009 c8 fyee
Now finally both of them safe...haha...Shizuru fall in love with Natsuki hope Natsuki feel the same...Thanks for the story...
Now finally both of them safe...haha...Shizuru fall in love with Natsuki hope Natsuki feel the same...Thanks for the story...
8/23/2009 c8 
3Mein Gott
Are you sure this chapter was beta'd? I still see some a lot of spelling errors and some grammar that needs some adjusting. Please don't take offense. I just wanted to make sure you didn't post the wrong version of the chapter or something since it doesn't look like it touched the hands of a beta.
Great story though!
3Mein GottAre you sure this chapter was beta'd? I still see some a lot of spelling errors and some grammar that needs some adjusting. Please don't take offense. I just wanted to make sure you didn't post the wrong version of the chapter or something since it doesn't look like it touched the hands of a beta.
Great story though!
8/10/2009 c7 3Beaustiful
Ah my beta skills make me proud lol XD Honey you should edit the other chapters and put it my beta'd version for any new readers.. If you need any help let me know...
3BeaustifulAh my beta skills make me proud lol XD Honey you should edit the other chapters and put it my beta'd version for any new readers.. If you need any help let me know...
8/10/2009 c7 fyee
They haven'r realize they had fallen for each others...and what happen next? Hope you may updated soon..Thanks...
They haven'r realize they had fallen for each others...and what happen next? Hope you may updated soon..Thanks...