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9/20/2019 c1 61Zabbie Q
Although you moved onto other projects, this still looks like it would have been interesting. :) Perhaps you could someday reboot and start afresh (should the mood and inspiration ever hit you, of course). I liked that you went with the realistic route of having the kiss be unpleasant at this point in time, and the description of it having the taste of worms, bugs, dirt, and mold is quite vivid.
12/7/2011 c1 3Twylaheart
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4/8/2010 c1 1BlackRose-FlowerofDeath
Well snap! I can't wait to see how this plays out!

BlackRose
3/8/2009 c1 badkidoh
it's good so far.
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3/8/2009 c1 1WolfxAngel
Lol, I like this so far! :D Please, update as soon as possible!
3/6/2009 c1 sugardandy
good start, i hope you post more soon!
3/6/2009 c1 1Blackstone River
A promising start! I prefer Beetlejuice stories that emphasize how disgusting and gross he is (even though I love the Lydia/BJ ship), and I'm a bit tired of stories that have the two in love while delicately skimming over the whole HE'S A MOLDY CORPSE! bit.

Your story could benefit from slightly more careful editing, but you have obvious talent as a writer. I'm looking forward to see where you take this!

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