for Fragments of the Past: the Lie and the Promise12/27/2009 c2 HIYA
UPDATE WILL YA OR ELSE I"M GONNA GO BANKAI ON YOU... GOT IT
UPDATE WILL YA OR ELSE I"M GONNA GO BANKAI ON YOU... GOT IT
8/5/2009 c2 
3youshallnotpass
very cute chapter- sorry it took me so long to review you! I always get caught up in things. Anyway, hope to see more soon :)
-yo
3youshallnotpassvery cute chapter- sorry it took me so long to review you! I always get caught up in things. Anyway, hope to see more soon :)
-yo
8/4/2009 c2 1psyche.Sleep
PHO-NEE!:D another interesting story full of mysteries! love it! and it's actualy 'Nanao' *giggles* you really should flame the website that provides the information to you. anyways, update soon!
1psyche.SleepPHO-NEE!:D another interesting story full of mysteries! love it! and it's actualy 'Nanao' *giggles* you really should flame the website that provides the information to you. anyways, update soon!
8/3/2009 c2 Fafacute
I like your story. Will ichigo end up with inoe? (i don't like that pairing) he..he... Maybe u can make ichigo love rukia... N ichigo will have competition with hitsugaya... But,it's up 2 u. Just,please make a lot of hitsuruki moment.
I can't wait to read next chapter! ^.^
I like your story. Will ichigo end up with inoe? (i don't like that pairing) he..he... Maybe u can make ichigo love rukia... N ichigo will have competition with hitsugaya... But,it's up 2 u. Just,please make a lot of hitsuruki moment.
I can't wait to read next chapter! ^.^
8/3/2009 c2 8Seriyan
I MADE YOUR DAY AWSOME?
SQUEE!
GET OVER HERE, PHO CHAN! *pulls you into hug*
*huggles snot outta you*
I LOVE YOU!
... update soon. KK?
8SeriyanI MADE YOUR DAY AWSOME?
SQUEE!
GET OVER HERE, PHO CHAN! *pulls you into hug*
*huggles snot outta you*
I LOVE YOU!
... update soon. KK?
8/1/2009 c1 Icicleriver22
i think this is such a good story pleasee update very soon i love this story
i think this is such a good story pleasee update very soon i love this story
5/15/2009 c1 Seriyan
I LOVE IT!
and besides, you've got some amazing talent yourself, it makes me happy reading this.
'this is going to be one hell of a year'
It sure will be when you update... and don't worry, if you take too long, I'll just come through the computer and poke you with a gummybear.
*has gummybear song stuck in my head*
I LOVE IT!
and besides, you've got some amazing talent yourself, it makes me happy reading this.
'this is going to be one hell of a year'
It sure will be when you update... and don't worry, if you take too long, I'll just come through the computer and poke you with a gummybear.
*has gummybear song stuck in my head*
4/19/2009 c1 bc
i like how it starting.. i like it alot
i like how it starting.. i like it alot
4/10/2009 c1 3youshallnotpass
Very entertaining- can't believe I missed this one. Good job. The little bit at the end with the error pointing at the review button was cute too.
yousha
3youshallnotpassVery entertaining- can't believe I missed this one. Good job. The little bit at the end with the error pointing at the review button was cute too.
yousha
3/21/2009 c1 16BlackBelt
Hey! Not too bad of a first chapter! =3 Seems like you are going down an interesting path with this plot! ^^ I can't wait to read what you have in store for this story! So please update soon!
16BlackBeltHey! Not too bad of a first chapter! =3 Seems like you are going down an interesting path with this plot! ^^ I can't wait to read what you have in store for this story! So please update soon!
3/21/2009 c1 18Tsuyucchi
Wonderful, phoenixfire-chan. You really showed Toushirou's character. Hmm, I can't help thinking that I've read a fic where the two main characters meet through a school transfer...Kingdom Hearts maybe? Oh well.
Yay, Hiyori's there! She my second favorite female character in Bleach (Rukia's my number 1)
Wee, the Broken Lie group sounds intruiging...wonder why it's a called that. I kinda have an idea but I'm gonna see if I'm right first.
Not much to critque on this. Except I found a few sentences where you left a word or two out of. Nothing really major.
I'll be keeping tabs on your fic. Update soon!
18TsuyucchiWonderful, phoenixfire-chan. You really showed Toushirou's character. Hmm, I can't help thinking that I've read a fic where the two main characters meet through a school transfer...Kingdom Hearts maybe? Oh well.
Yay, Hiyori's there! She my second favorite female character in Bleach (Rukia's my number 1)
Wee, the Broken Lie group sounds intruiging...wonder why it's a called that. I kinda have an idea but I'm gonna see if I'm right first.
Not much to critque on this. Except I found a few sentences where you left a word or two out of. Nothing really major.
I'll be keeping tabs on your fic. Update soon!
3/21/2009 c1 2rukisea
ROFL! Hitsugaya is just adorable in this...Ulqui-chan said 'lovely ladies'...lovely ladies...*still giggling* I'd die if he said that in the anime!
This is col! Send the next chapter to me for betaing!
2rukiseaROFL! Hitsugaya is just adorable in this...Ulqui-chan said 'lovely ladies'...lovely ladies...*still giggling* I'd die if he said that in the anime!
This is col! Send the next chapter to me for betaing!
3/10/2009 c1 35vedette26
Hm...the plot's quite interesting and I like it.
Though...you could put more...umm...character to the character? I dunno, Hitsu-chan doesn't seem cold in here. (did that make sense?) No offense to your writing style, of course.
Anyhow, update soon!
35vedette26Hm...the plot's quite interesting and I like it.
Though...you could put more...umm...character to the character? I dunno, Hitsu-chan doesn't seem cold in here. (did that make sense?) No offense to your writing style, of course.
Anyhow, update soon!
3/8/2009 c1 Loser-HimexD
Too vague needs a lot You are rushing things too much. Toshiro doesnt act like that try watching toshiro more closely in the anime shows and pretend you are him. Trust me it helps your writing a lot!
Maybe you should just put it in Rukia's Pov only too make toshiro more mysterious. Remember a good story needs only 1 person Point of View.
Please update so i can see how you will improve.=]
Too vague needs a lot You are rushing things too much. Toshiro doesnt act like that try watching toshiro more closely in the anime shows and pretend you are him. Trust me it helps your writing a lot!
Maybe you should just put it in Rukia's Pov only too make toshiro more mysterious. Remember a good story needs only 1 person Point of View.
Please update so i can see how you will improve.=]