for My Life Would Suck Without You3/8/2009 c2 
58BurningxRedxCaskett
love the title of the story (kelly's one of the best, lol) um...cant wait for more! UD soon!
58BurningxRedxCaskettlove the title of the story (kelly's one of the best, lol) um...cant wait for more! UD soon!
3/8/2009 c2 ESLgirl
Wow, kind of a mess. You have lots of run on sentences. You're missing several apostrophes. Learn what contractions are. And learn how to use commas. In fact, getting a beta would be the best thing you could do at this point.
Wow, kind of a mess. You have lots of run on sentences. You're missing several apostrophes. Learn what contractions are. And learn how to use commas. In fact, getting a beta would be the best thing you could do at this point.