
3/11/2009 c1
83Lady Emily
Fantastic start. This reads just like a supermystery- the boys on a case, Nancy just happening to be participating in a golf tournament (of all things!)... but of course there's the exciting angle of Frank's brand new breakup as well... And can I just say I really like your title?
Anyway, really good, well-written start. Can't wait to read more!

Fantastic start. This reads just like a supermystery- the boys on a case, Nancy just happening to be participating in a golf tournament (of all things!)... but of course there's the exciting angle of Frank's brand new breakup as well... And can I just say I really like your title?
Anyway, really good, well-written start. Can't wait to read more!
3/11/2009 c1 Dayssoapfan1984
Great opening. I liked how Bess is the fashion conscious caddy on the golf course.
Can't wait to the next update.
Great opening. I liked how Bess is the fashion conscious caddy on the golf course.
Can't wait to the next update.
3/11/2009 c1 Anon
Great plot so far! I look forward to see where you're going with this! Please update soon!
Great plot so far! I look forward to see where you're going with this! Please update soon!