
7/22/2009 c1
8DesertVixen
** Frank rolled his eyes. “Come on, Joe,” He said, grabbing his bags and walking towards the glass elevator. “Joe, can you please restrain from flirting with any attractive girl you meet?” Frank asked, laughing at his brother.
Joe seemed to be distracted by something he saw through the glass elevator as they waited for the elevator doors to close. “What about an attractive girl I’ve already met?” **
Can't remember if I reviewed the chap originally, but I *love* this line. It is a pretty good sum up of the brothers' interactions.
DV

** Frank rolled his eyes. “Come on, Joe,” He said, grabbing his bags and walking towards the glass elevator. “Joe, can you please restrain from flirting with any attractive girl you meet?” Frank asked, laughing at his brother.
Joe seemed to be distracted by something he saw through the glass elevator as they waited for the elevator doors to close. “What about an attractive girl I’ve already met?” **
Can't remember if I reviewed the chap originally, but I *love* this line. It is a pretty good sum up of the brothers' interactions.
DV
7/21/2009 c16 maisey21
great story overall!(: hope you make another story like this!
awesum job!:D
great story overall!(: hope you make another story like this!
awesum job!:D
7/16/2009 c16
5beautyqueen321
I just read the entire story, and I have to say... I LOVED it! And don't let the other reviewers doubt your judgement, I really liked how you wrote the last chapter. I agree that the whole "damsel in distress" doesn't really fit Nancy.
Anyway, keep up the great work and I am so looking forward to reading future works of yours.

I just read the entire story, and I have to say... I LOVED it! And don't let the other reviewers doubt your judgement, I really liked how you wrote the last chapter. I agree that the whole "damsel in distress" doesn't really fit Nancy.
Anyway, keep up the great work and I am so looking forward to reading future works of yours.
7/12/2009 c16 missxsteph
I'm so happy with this chapter, and agree entirely with you about Nancy's strong character and personality. Thats one of the many reason's I love reading the mysteries. Of course everyone expected Frank to save the day, but I'm slightly glad he didn't.
I'm so sad the story is over, but I enjoyed every bit of it, and will probably end up reading it again.
Keep writing these awesome stories =)
I'm so happy with this chapter, and agree entirely with you about Nancy's strong character and personality. Thats one of the many reason's I love reading the mysteries. Of course everyone expected Frank to save the day, but I'm slightly glad he didn't.
I'm so sad the story is over, but I enjoyed every bit of it, and will probably end up reading it again.
Keep writing these awesome stories =)
7/9/2009 c16 Dayssoapfan1984
What an awesome way to end this story.
I hope you write a sequel. I think a story about their detective agency would be awesome.
What an awesome way to end this story.
I hope you write a sequel. I think a story about their detective agency would be awesome.
6/20/2009 c16
38ladybug1115
I loved the ending. I have always liked Nancy because she is such a strong female character. I was raised to believe a woman can do anything a man can so I was happy that you didn't make Nancy a damsel in distress.
Overall, I enjoyed the story. I think it was very well written and very interesting.
ladybug15

I loved the ending. I have always liked Nancy because she is such a strong female character. I was raised to believe a woman can do anything a man can so I was happy that you didn't make Nancy a damsel in distress.
Overall, I enjoyed the story. I think it was very well written and very interesting.
ladybug15
6/19/2009 c16
19niver
Sorry I haven't exactly been around. Exams will do that to you.
Great chapters, and amazing ending. I had no problem with Frank not saving the day. I too love Nancy's strength and it's a shame if she isn't allowed to use it just so her love interest can help her.
JAKE YOU BASTARD.
Amazing amazing story. Will there be a sequel with them all as partners?

Sorry I haven't exactly been around. Exams will do that to you.
Great chapters, and amazing ending. I had no problem with Frank not saving the day. I too love Nancy's strength and it's a shame if she isn't allowed to use it just so her love interest can help her.
JAKE YOU BASTARD.
Amazing amazing story. Will there be a sequel with them all as partners?
6/1/2009 c16
4IrishShamrock86
I personally think that was a great way to end the story. Frank doesn't need to be Nancy's hero all the time! Way to go Nan! Great job and great story!

I personally think that was a great way to end the story. Frank doesn't need to be Nancy's hero all the time! Way to go Nan! Great job and great story!
5/25/2009 c16
5Grey Fool
I almost expected Frank to be the first one in the building instead of the police. But I didn't even had a problem with that. Great job.

I almost expected Frank to be the first one in the building instead of the police. But I didn't even had a problem with that. Great job.
5/24/2009 c16 sapphiretwin369
I don't think you blew off the cliffhanger at all. You just created more suspense as to what Frank was gonna do by not resolving it right away. I agree that Nancy would take things into her own hands. So please don't take those reviews too personally. You didn't betray my trust!
I think this was a wonderfully written story and I liked the ending. Too bad it ended up being Jake. That's so sad for Nick! And yay! Frank and Nancy finally kissed! Nice job!
I don't think you blew off the cliffhanger at all. You just created more suspense as to what Frank was gonna do by not resolving it right away. I agree that Nancy would take things into her own hands. So please don't take those reviews too personally. You didn't betray my trust!
I think this was a wonderfully written story and I liked the ending. Too bad it ended up being Jake. That's so sad for Nick! And yay! Frank and Nancy finally kissed! Nice job!
5/24/2009 c16 Rita
You set up a cliffie in your last chapter, then completely blew it off in the next chapter, except as a back-handed afterthought. That's not only bad writing, it's real betrayl of your readers' trust.
You set up a cliffie in your last chapter, then completely blew it off in the next chapter, except as a back-handed afterthought. That's not only bad writing, it's real betrayl of your readers' trust.
5/24/2009 c16
83Lady Emily
Fantastic ending! I really liked the cheerleader connection- how Nancy figured out the culprit at the last minute. I knew there was something off about that guy! And poor Frank- hearing the gunshot and fearing the worst... I loved his conversation with Nancy, as well as their long-awaited confessions. Beautifully written.
Congratulations on a supermystery well done!

Fantastic ending! I really liked the cheerleader connection- how Nancy figured out the culprit at the last minute. I knew there was something off about that guy! And poor Frank- hearing the gunshot and fearing the worst... I loved his conversation with Nancy, as well as their long-awaited confessions. Beautifully written.
Congratulations on a supermystery well done!
5/23/2009 c16 Abby
Wow! What a HUGE disappointment! You leave the last chapter as if Frank is going to be part of the action or maybe in danger, and he doesn't even appear except for the wrapup! Bummer! Totally disillusioned and let down! Guess I'll know better in the future and give you a pass!
Wow! What a HUGE disappointment! You leave the last chapter as if Frank is going to be part of the action or maybe in danger, and he doesn't even appear except for the wrapup! Bummer! Totally disillusioned and let down! Guess I'll know better in the future and give you a pass!
5/20/2009 c15 sapphiretwin369
Nice chapter! Poor Bess. I couldn't stand all that worry. Well, Frank's off to the rescue! Can't wait to see what happens next! Congrats on your hole in one btw! :)
Nice chapter! Poor Bess. I couldn't stand all that worry. Well, Frank's off to the rescue! Can't wait to see what happens next! Congrats on your hole in one btw! :)