for Three Under Par4/28/2009 c10 Diamond and Stars
Wow. This is pretty interesting! I'm stumped...I can't wait to see what's going on! :D
xoxo
D&S
p.s. I'm bummed to read that you deleted "All criminals want to get caught" That was a good story! I hope you get past your writers block soon!
Wow. This is pretty interesting! I'm stumped...I can't wait to see what's going on! :D
xoxo
D&S
p.s. I'm bummed to read that you deleted "All criminals want to get caught" That was a good story! I hope you get past your writers block soon!
4/26/2009 c10 hannah
still love it nothin wrong with it its perfect\
still love it nothin wrong with it its perfect\
4/26/2009 c9 hannah
o i loved tht chapter it was so not dry i loved the frank/nancy thing
o i loved tht chapter it was so not dry i loved the frank/nancy thing
4/26/2009 c8 hannah
awesome cliffie still cant find anything wrong totally love it u rock
awesome cliffie still cant find anything wrong totally love it u rock
4/26/2009 c7 hannah
i love the cell ring scene thts absolutely hilarious i havent found anything i didnt like yet
i love the cell ring scene thts absolutely hilarious i havent found anything i didnt like yet
4/26/2009 c6 hannah
cliffies r evil but awesome thts true but dont worry i dont think it was very dry i liked it u r a true writer
cliffies r evil but awesome thts true but dont worry i dont think it was very dry i liked it u r a true writer
4/26/2009 c5 hannah
i love the cliffy dont worry cliffies r wat keep me reading
i love the cliffy dont worry cliffies r wat keep me reading
4/26/2009 c4 hannah
i dont care tht u made ned the bad guy i am soaking up this story like a sponge soaking up water
i dont care tht u made ned the bad guy i am soaking up this story like a sponge soaking up water
4/26/2009 c3 hannah
oh i absolutely love it if i didnt know better id say u r caroline keene
oh i absolutely love it if i didnt know better id say u r caroline keene
4/26/2009 c2 hannah
omg love it its like the perfect mystery/romance book
you should have it published
omg love it its like the perfect mystery/romance book
you should have it published
4/26/2009 c1 hannah
omg thts great write more fast i like how u brought the 2 2gether
omg thts great write more fast i like how u brought the 2 2gether
4/26/2009 c10 Dayssoapfan1984
Another great chapter.
I hate cliffies, however, they are necessary part of any good mystery.
As someone who works in healthcare. I think you should know that Nancy, Frank, and Joe would have to show indentification and some order before they could look in an doctor's offices computer system. HIPPA, the privacy act, prohibits release of patient's medical records without their signed authorization.
Just wanted you to know.
Can't wait to see what happens next, so update real quick.
Another great chapter.
I hate cliffies, however, they are necessary part of any good mystery.
As someone who works in healthcare. I think you should know that Nancy, Frank, and Joe would have to show indentification and some order before they could look in an doctor's offices computer system. HIPPA, the privacy act, prohibits release of patient's medical records without their signed authorization.
Just wanted you to know.
Can't wait to see what happens next, so update real quick.
4/26/2009 c9 
17Jilsen
Sorry I haven't left a review earlier, but I love your story. I didn't think this chapter was dry at all! Anytime we get some Nancy/Frank action it's a good thing. You're doing a wonderful job with all the characters and I liked the shout-out to Last Resort.
Glad to hear your health is better, too!
17JilsenSorry I haven't left a review earlier, but I love your story. I didn't think this chapter was dry at all! Anytime we get some Nancy/Frank action it's a good thing. You're doing a wonderful job with all the characters and I liked the shout-out to Last Resort.
Glad to hear your health is better, too!
4/25/2009 c10 sapphiretwin369
Uh-oh! What happened? You've got me more curious with each chapter! Can't wait for another update!
Uh-oh! What happened? You've got me more curious with each chapter! Can't wait for another update!