for Three Under Par4/21/2009 c9 missxsteph
I agree with the Hardys and Nancy. This is a confusing case. I think thats what I like about it. Its hard to tell who the bad guy is.
I loved the end. It was so funny. I had to laugh into a pillow just so I wouldn't wake anyone up.
Great Chapter!
I can't wait to read what happens next.
I agree with the Hardys and Nancy. This is a confusing case. I think thats what I like about it. Its hard to tell who the bad guy is.
I loved the end. It was so funny. I had to laugh into a pillow just so I wouldn't wake anyone up.
Great Chapter!
I can't wait to read what happens next.
4/19/2009 c8 
19niver
OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO. I wonder what Frankie realized!
A part of me still suspects Madison. But then again, that's the part of me that suspects everyone. xD
Great chapter!
19niverOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO. I wonder what Frankie realized!
A part of me still suspects Madison. But then again, that's the part of me that suspects everyone. xD
Great chapter!
4/14/2009 c8 83Lady Emily
Wait, how do we know that? I mean, I believe Nick too... but what is the deal with that card? Another great chapter- short, but interesting. Nick's got a formidable opponent if he really did rig the drug test to show a false positive! Looks like we should maybe be adding some doctors onto our suspect list? Anyway, as I've been telling you, I'm still really enjoying this story and I can't wait to read the rest!
83Lady EmilyWait, how do we know that? I mean, I believe Nick too... but what is the deal with that card? Another great chapter- short, but interesting. Nick's got a formidable opponent if he really did rig the drug test to show a false positive! Looks like we should maybe be adding some doctors onto our suspect list? Anyway, as I've been telling you, I'm still really enjoying this story and I can't wait to read the rest!
4/9/2009 c7 1CrystalHeart27
Oh gods, I nearly doubled in laughter at the ringtone-no, wait. I did. XD Update soon!
1CrystalHeart27Oh gods, I nearly doubled in laughter at the ringtone-no, wait. I did. XD Update soon!
4/6/2009 c7 4IrishShamrock86
Good chapter! It's fun to watch Frank and Nancy dance around their relationship. I love Bess too! Keep up the good work!
4IrishShamrock86Good chapter! It's fun to watch Frank and Nancy dance around their relationship. I love Bess too! Keep up the good work!
4/6/2009 c7 83Lady Emily
Lol cute scene. You've gotta love Bess and her eavesdropping, meddling, busybody ways. I like Nancy trying to convince herself that she shouldn't be moving in on Frank right after his breakup with Callie... you can't make this too easy for them, can you? And Jake is definitely acting suspicious. He seems very defensive and even a little bitter, although Nick doesn't seem to notice, so perhaps that's just his normal personality... Well as usual, great chapter, and thanks for the early update. Can't wait for more!
83Lady EmilyLol cute scene. You've gotta love Bess and her eavesdropping, meddling, busybody ways. I like Nancy trying to convince herself that she shouldn't be moving in on Frank right after his breakup with Callie... you can't make this too easy for them, can you? And Jake is definitely acting suspicious. He seems very defensive and even a little bitter, although Nick doesn't seem to notice, so perhaps that's just his normal personality... Well as usual, great chapter, and thanks for the early update. Can't wait for more!
4/6/2009 c7 5Grey Fool
Great job! Keep up the good work. Oh and I thought you revealed Nancy's cell phone ring, not frank's.
5Grey FoolGreat job! Keep up the good work. Oh and I thought you revealed Nancy's cell phone ring, not frank's.
4/6/2009 c7 sapphiretwin369
I did actually get three 'new chapter' alerts, but it doesn't bother me. :)
I'm really interested now to know more of Jake's story. I also like how they left Frank and Nancy together. That is so typical! And how Bess was eavesdropping and Nancy knew it and Bess didn't care. That shows just how well they know each other. :)
Aww! Nancy's on Frank's speed dial! Lol! I love Nancy's ringtone for Frank! That is hilarious! I'm glad you didn't edit that part out. It was realy funny and the lyrics were perfect!
Nice job! I'm looking forward to more!
I did actually get three 'new chapter' alerts, but it doesn't bother me. :)
I'm really interested now to know more of Jake's story. I also like how they left Frank and Nancy together. That is so typical! And how Bess was eavesdropping and Nancy knew it and Bess didn't care. That shows just how well they know each other. :)
Aww! Nancy's on Frank's speed dial! Lol! I love Nancy's ringtone for Frank! That is hilarious! I'm glad you didn't edit that part out. It was realy funny and the lyrics were perfect!
Nice job! I'm looking forward to more!