for Discovering Tranquillity8/31/2011 c13 SNAPE38
GOOD STORY
HAD TROUBLE UNDERSTANDING HERMIONE AT THE START BUT KEEP AT IT AND FOUND THE ENDING UNDERSTANDABLE JUST
GOOD WAY IT END THE STORY AS WELL I THOUGHT
JUST LEAVING THEM AS THEY ARE AND NOT KNOWING IF THEY MAKE IT
GOOD STORY
HAD TROUBLE UNDERSTANDING HERMIONE AT THE START BUT KEEP AT IT AND FOUND THE ENDING UNDERSTANDABLE JUST
GOOD WAY IT END THE STORY AS WELL I THOUGHT
JUST LEAVING THEM AS THEY ARE AND NOT KNOWING IF THEY MAKE IT
7/7/2009 c13 Loyd1957
I can see the conflict between the two. I like that they are still questioning what they are feeling. He doesn't want to believe it and she is uncertain of why. I like the path this is taking and the questions that obviously need to be answered by Snape to Hermione.
I can see the conflict between the two. I like that they are still questioning what they are feeling. He doesn't want to believe it and she is uncertain of why. I like the path this is taking and the questions that obviously need to be answered by Snape to Hermione.
4/12/2009 c12 
12BooksandBubblegum
*squel* L is for the way you look at me...lol (reference to song-L.O.V.E. just to let you know I'm not completely crazy...) Yes! So happy dramatic/romantic scene coming up! WOHO! The P.o.v. from Snape's mind is so, so, good...m
Okay then, onto the next chapter!
12BooksandBubblegum*squel* L is for the way you look at me...lol (reference to song-L.O.V.E. just to let you know I'm not completely crazy...) Yes! So happy dramatic/romantic scene coming up! WOHO! The P.o.v. from Snape's mind is so, so, good...m
Okay then, onto the next chapter!
4/12/2009 c11 BooksandBubblegum
Yeah! Snape in next chapter! I can't wait to see/hear his reaction to Hermione stalking him...
Yeah! Snape in next chapter! I can't wait to see/hear his reaction to Hermione stalking him...
4/12/2009 c10 BooksandBubblegum
Aww I kinda feel sorry for Ron :( if only he wasn't so annoying in the books...
I like the whole emotional tugging going on between Sanpe, Hermione, Ron and Ginny it's very well done. Wonderful descriptions as always.
Aww I kinda feel sorry for Ron :( if only he wasn't so annoying in the books...
I like the whole emotional tugging going on between Sanpe, Hermione, Ron and Ginny it's very well done. Wonderful descriptions as always.
4/12/2009 c9 BooksandBubblegum
I love ginny automatically assumes it's a guy...one track mind? i hope there will be snape in the next chappie...
I love ginny automatically assumes it's a guy...one track mind? i hope there will be snape in the next chappie...
4/12/2009 c12 298thweasleykid
I just came across your story and I am enjoying it. I've always been a fan of HG/SS stories. I look foward to readsing more.
298thweasleykidI just came across your story and I am enjoying it. I've always been a fan of HG/SS stories. I look foward to readsing more.
4/12/2009 c8 12BooksandBubblegum
The two of them...I love their private thoughts! And Snape referring to what occured as 'seducing her' you have to wonder...does this happen a lot? Maybe not considering he is busy calling himself disgusgting...
12BooksandBubblegumThe two of them...I love their private thoughts! And Snape referring to what occured as 'seducing her' you have to wonder...does this happen a lot? Maybe not considering he is busy calling himself disgusgting...
4/12/2009 c7 BooksandBubblegum
I lo-OVE the first line of this chapter! 'to forget the memory of her shivering against him...' omgomgomgomgomgomgomg! I can't describe...He is soo SEXY! I bow down to your writing prowess
I lo-OVE the first line of this chapter! 'to forget the memory of her shivering against him...' omgomgomgomgomgomgomg! I can't describe...He is soo SEXY! I bow down to your writing prowess
4/12/2009 c6 BooksandBubblegum
snape is so hot! THANKYOU! It is so hard to find a decent snape around fanfiction these days..but wow! Okay I think I'm gonna re-read that a couple times *squels*
snape is so hot! THANKYOU! It is so hard to find a decent snape around fanfiction these days..but wow! Okay I think I'm gonna re-read that a couple times *squels*
4/12/2009 c5 BooksandBubblegum
...wow. IT'S SNAPE RIGHT? RIGHT? okay just hoping hermione will be okay considering she is apparently in the presence of 10 death eaters.. Snape is going to save her or talk to her and tell her she is stupid and then they're gonna have a dramatic moment together...in which we get to hear his thoughts about hermione...right? Oh well I guess I will have to read on to find out...btw nice chapter
...wow. IT'S SNAPE RIGHT? RIGHT? okay just hoping hermione will be okay considering she is apparently in the presence of 10 death eaters.. Snape is going to save her or talk to her and tell her she is stupid and then they're gonna have a dramatic moment together...in which we get to hear his thoughts about hermione...right? Oh well I guess I will have to read on to find out...btw nice chapter
4/12/2009 c4 BooksandBubblegum
Okay first of all that must have been a REALLY awkward train ride *winces* and the whole crying in front of an entire platform of people ...wow. I wonder why Snape is on the platform, and why was he watching Hermione?Was he waiting and got bored? Was he protecting them from something? The questions go on and on...
Okay first of all that must have been a REALLY awkward train ride *winces* and the whole crying in front of an entire platform of people ...wow. I wonder why Snape is on the platform, and why was he watching Hermione?Was he waiting and got bored? Was he protecting them from something? The questions go on and on...