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4/26/2013 c1 4Nikkie2010
It's been awhile since you updated...I sincerely hope you haven't abandoned this story, I'm very curious to know what happened!
11/6/2012 c2 Nikkie2010
...And still waiting for chapter 3... -_- hope you still have it...
1/18/2011 c2 fayoumi15
I really like this! I hope you continue with it!

Update soon! =D
11/18/2010 c2 11Oni Mathier
Nice chapter! Definitely glad that you did not finish the story this time. :D

Prowl and Jazz's interactions feel very "real" in how you have written them. Wonderfully done.
11/18/2010 c2 42optimus prime 007
omg! I just read this the other day during lunch and was thinkig of PMing you to update it! lmao.

*sigh*

I love the P&J tender quiet moments the best. Their more rowdy moments are just fun! lol Smokey was funny though walking in on P&J. Of course the older brother has to tease his younger brother.

As always a wonderful fic and chapter looking forward to any updates you have coming! :)
3/2/2010 c1 fayoumi15
great so far! please continue with it! update soon!
3/13/2009 c1 9cmdrtekk
A very nice gently done piece. The pace careful and not rushed.

Thanks for sharing.
3/13/2009 c1 11DitzyMusicLover
I like it enough. Then again, this is one couple I can't get enough of. It's great as a oneshot, but I'm putting it on story alert, just in case.

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