
4/26/2013 c1
4Nikkie2010
It's been awhile since you updated...I sincerely hope you haven't abandoned this story, I'm very curious to know what happened!

It's been awhile since you updated...I sincerely hope you haven't abandoned this story, I'm very curious to know what happened!
11/18/2010 c2
11Oni Mathier
Nice chapter! Definitely glad that you did not finish the story this time. :D
Prowl and Jazz's interactions feel very "real" in how you have written them. Wonderfully done.

Nice chapter! Definitely glad that you did not finish the story this time. :D
Prowl and Jazz's interactions feel very "real" in how you have written them. Wonderfully done.
11/18/2010 c2
42optimus prime 007
omg! I just read this the other day during lunch and was thinkig of PMing you to update it! lmao.
*sigh*
I love the P&J tender quiet moments the best. Their more rowdy moments are just fun! lol Smokey was funny though walking in on P&J. Of course the older brother has to tease his younger brother.
As always a wonderful fic and chapter looking forward to any updates you have coming! :)

omg! I just read this the other day during lunch and was thinkig of PMing you to update it! lmao.
*sigh*
I love the P&J tender quiet moments the best. Their more rowdy moments are just fun! lol Smokey was funny though walking in on P&J. Of course the older brother has to tease his younger brother.
As always a wonderful fic and chapter looking forward to any updates you have coming! :)
3/13/2009 c1
9cmdrtekk
A very nice gently done piece. The pace careful and not rushed.
Thanks for sharing.

A very nice gently done piece. The pace careful and not rushed.
Thanks for sharing.
3/13/2009 c1
11DitzyMusicLover
I like it enough. Then again, this is one couple I can't get enough of. It's great as a oneshot, but I'm putting it on story alert, just in case.

I like it enough. Then again, this is one couple I can't get enough of. It's great as a oneshot, but I'm putting it on story alert, just in case.