for ZAT: The Immortal Saiyan6/30 c6 supersaiyaman
i like that gohan is taking to the wepon so quickly but in reality all this is probably taking months if not years. gohan is a remarkable character and he has abilities that still in the anime were and still are un utilized. this is a very good fanfiction.
i like that gohan is taking to the wepon so quickly but in reality all this is probably taking months if not years. gohan is a remarkable character and he has abilities that still in the anime were and still are un utilized. this is a very good fanfiction.
6/30 c5 supersaiyaman
i kinda feal bad that someone has to do all those dishes gohan has quit an more energy you expend the more you have to eat you no wonder saiyans seat so much.
i kinda feal bad that someone has to do all those dishes gohan has quit an more energy you expend the more you have to eat you no wonder saiyans seat so much.
6/30 c4 Guest
thast does se4am to be correct in the anime gohan did seam like he was afraid of disappointing his mother and his father. He ultimately decided to fallow his mothers path for him. he did defeat cell however after that he dropped off as a fighter. majan boo he fought but after that he became a sculler like his mother wanted.
thast does se4am to be correct in the anime gohan did seam like he was afraid of disappointing his mother and his father. He ultimately decided to fallow his mothers path for him. he did defeat cell however after that he dropped off as a fighter. majan boo he fought but after that he became a sculler like his mother wanted.
6/30 c2 supersaiyaman
i wonder what opening up your true selves means i like this story so far keep up the good work.
i wonder what opening up your true selves means i like this story so far keep up the good work.
6/30 c1 supersaiyaman
that was a great first chapter it kills me how gohan was made irrelevant in dragon ball z after the cell saga. i am looking forward to reading more. I like how he sacrificed himself for the earth i cant wait to read what happnes next.
that was a great first chapter it kills me how gohan was made irrelevant in dragon ball z after the cell saga. i am looking forward to reading more. I like how he sacrificed himself for the earth i cant wait to read what happnes next.
7/23/2020 c7 Scissors Dolphin
FIFA and Superbowl doesn't exist in this universe.
Also, your English is off.
Also, the progression of time is not well described in your story. Somehow, they went from talking about the tournament, to competing, without a transition.
FIFA and Superbowl doesn't exist in this universe.
Also, your English is off.
Also, the progression of time is not well described in your story. Somehow, they went from talking about the tournament, to competing, without a transition.
7/23/2020 c6 Scissors Dolphin
One ton per ounce? Both are measures of mass.
That's like saying the sword ways 5 kg per kg.
One ton per ounce? Both are measures of mass.
That's like saying the sword ways 5 kg per kg.
9/17/2019 c3 Gabriel Zuleta
Deberias mostrarle esos 39 capítulos al creador, para que vea tu saga
Deberias mostrarle esos 39 capítulos al creador, para que vea tu saga
4/21/2019 c7 emma
i'm interested in seeing how goku is affected by gohans death.
i'm interested in seeing how goku is affected by gohans death.
2/25/2019 c38 Guest
shit fic
shit fic
8/8/2018 c8 Fullmetal11791
Im confused. The beginning of the last chapter said "seven years later". Gohan was like 10 or 11 when he died in this stories Cell Saga. Goten is 6 or 7 here, so yea, 7 years have passed.
... so why is Gohan showing up on Earth as an 11 year old? He should be like 17 or 18. I don't get it.
Im confused. The beginning of the last chapter said "seven years later". Gohan was like 10 or 11 when he died in this stories Cell Saga. Goten is 6 or 7 here, so yea, 7 years have passed.
... so why is Gohan showing up on Earth as an 11 year old? He should be like 17 or 18. I don't get it.