for Always and Forever7/17/2012 c1 gemaa
pretty good.. maybe a little more description but over all your a pretty great writer.! x
pretty good.. maybe a little more description but over all your a pretty great writer.! x
5/4/2011 c1 
24Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain
Holy... shit. That poem was so amazing, I think I broke my jaw!
24Amethyst Skulkyrie CainHoly... shit. That poem was so amazing, I think I broke my jaw!
12/29/2009 c1 2emo-licious-gummies
You should write more. I think that Zoey should be with Loren anyway. He sounds so dreamy. He knows how to treat her right. But then again, Erik understands and Heath has been with her since they were little. Heath would never work out though. I love Erik and Loren the most. Stark...I don't like him. He just doesn't seem right. Plus the fact that he's dead, smelly, and EW!
2emo-licious-gummiesYou should write more. I think that Zoey should be with Loren anyway. He sounds so dreamy. He knows how to treat her right. But then again, Erik understands and Heath has been with her since they were little. Heath would never work out though. I love Erik and Loren the most. Stark...I don't like him. He just doesn't seem right. Plus the fact that he's dead, smelly, and EW!
6/30/2009 c1 15Natalie668
I cryed :'(
Poor Loren, I agree with your version
Loren was good I tell you!
anyways I think you should try and write a multi-chapter for this pairing
x x x
15Natalie668I cryed :'(
Poor Loren, I agree with your version
Loren was good I tell you!
anyways I think you should try and write a multi-chapter for this pairing
x x x
3/16/2009 c1 bellanedward4ever05
In my thoughts i always thought like this of Loren. That he had really fallen in love with Zoey. And i think thats why Neferet killed him. Well that is my theory.
In my thoughts i always thought like this of Loren. That he had really fallen in love with Zoey. And i think thats why Neferet killed him. Well that is my theory.
3/15/2009 c1 2EmmaClearwater
Oh if it only really happened that way. Your story is so sweet. I love it! You did a really great job with the poem. You're an awesome writer!
2EmmaClearwaterOh if it only really happened that way. Your story is so sweet. I love it! You did a really great job with the poem. You're an awesome writer!