for Absinthe1/20/2012 c1 
40Timemidae
Wow, this was really cool. I love how she is like the personification of everything the moulan rouge is about.
40TimemidaeWow, this was really cool. I love how she is like the personification of everything the moulan rouge is about.
9/26/2010 c1 33Pelahnar
That was kinda cool - and it totally makes sense, putting the green fairy in charge of the night. And making her want revenge - sorry, but I don't think I'd want to be on the receiving end of her vengence...cool story.
33PelahnarThat was kinda cool - and it totally makes sense, putting the green fairy in charge of the night. And making her want revenge - sorry, but I don't think I'd want to be on the receiving end of her vengence...cool story.
4/4/2009 c1 9Traveler of Worlds
I don't think that was weird at all. Moulin Rouge has its own style, and you managed to capture that. It's sort of a myriad of images and impressions, and by giving life to a figurative being, you gave another viewpoint of Satine's fall. I think this was written brilliantly. Only one thing. "but shock damps the electric buzz of the atmosphere." It should be "shock dampens." Great piece, definitely intriguing.
9Traveler of WorldsI don't think that was weird at all. Moulin Rouge has its own style, and you managed to capture that. It's sort of a myriad of images and impressions, and by giving life to a figurative being, you gave another viewpoint of Satine's fall. I think this was written brilliantly. Only one thing. "but shock damps the electric buzz of the atmosphere." It should be "shock dampens." Great piece, definitely intriguing.