for Captured11/10/2011 c2 July Passion
Well this is really good! Well For the pairing thing? I would suggest a Natsume and Mikan pairing. But i haven't seen much Reo and Mikan pairing. That would be different. But anyway For the pairing It really doesn't matter to me. It's better if I don't know. Haha. But Just saying that most people will not look at stories if they are not the pariing that they want to read. so anyway Update soon! Please! Love it so much!
Well this is really good! Well For the pairing thing? I would suggest a Natsume and Mikan pairing. But i haven't seen much Reo and Mikan pairing. That would be different. But anyway For the pairing It really doesn't matter to me. It's better if I don't know. Haha. But Just saying that most people will not look at stories if they are not the pariing that they want to read. so anyway Update soon! Please! Love it so much!
11/10/2011 c1 July Passion
good story! Thanks for wrtiing this! haha the end of the chappie was somewhat funny!
good story! Thanks for wrtiing this! haha the end of the chappie was somewhat funny!
7/20/2011 c2 Too Kewl For You
This is an interesting story! But I couldn't help noticing that the second chapter, "the Gates of hell" is written in a different style than your previous one.
Do you know Silvermist76 or is she like your beta or something?
I want you to do Mikan and the ESP lol it's a cool pairing cos the esp is evil and all.
rei is cool too and there are hardly any rei x mikan stories out here.
i'm new to fanfiction so would it be too much if i asked you to help me find/read all the good stories out here?
thanks, and can't wait for the next chapter
This is an interesting story! But I couldn't help noticing that the second chapter, "the Gates of hell" is written in a different style than your previous one.
Do you know Silvermist76 or is she like your beta or something?
I want you to do Mikan and the ESP lol it's a cool pairing cos the esp is evil and all.
rei is cool too and there are hardly any rei x mikan stories out here.
i'm new to fanfiction so would it be too much if i asked you to help me find/read all the good stories out here?
thanks, and can't wait for the next chapter
7/17/2011 c2 
2yunamoogle
I really like your story you should make it chaptered. :D And for the pairings... I like how you're portraying it all so far, it's really good. But I just love Mikan X Natsume so I'll go with that. :D Keep up the good work! ^^
2yunamoogleI really like your story you should make it chaptered. :D And for the pairings... I like how you're portraying it all so far, it's really good. But I just love Mikan X Natsume so I'll go with that. :D Keep up the good work! ^^
7/16/2011 c2 Silvermist76
For the pairings...haha you know what I would say ;)
And amazing bestfriend?Yes, definitely ;) Buut the writing part..haha well I can't say anything about that, I'm not good.
Dude, a chaptered story. Come on. You're great. You can SO pull it off!AND you'll have me for ideas ;) lol
You can do it! Be a rist taker girl ;)
~silvermist76
For the pairings...haha you know what I would say ;)
And amazing bestfriend?Yes, definitely ;) Buut the writing part..haha well I can't say anything about that, I'm not good.
Dude, a chaptered story. Come on. You're great. You can SO pull it off!AND you'll have me for ideas ;) lol
You can do it! Be a rist taker girl ;)
~silvermist76
5/17/2011 c1 Silvermist76
Wow you wrote this like years ago! How? I mean I wouldn't have gotten the idea back then and heck you're pretty good. Besides a few grammatical erros here and there (I belive its the first time I ever found fault in your english :P lol) the story has a great theme. But I think you should reduce the number of times you change perspectives. It was kind of confusing if you know what I mean. Anyways I think you should write another chapter for this and you should definetely start writing more stories :D
Wow you wrote this like years ago! How? I mean I wouldn't have gotten the idea back then and heck you're pretty good. Besides a few grammatical erros here and there (I belive its the first time I ever found fault in your english :P lol) the story has a great theme. But I think you should reduce the number of times you change perspectives. It was kind of confusing if you know what I mean. Anyways I think you should write another chapter for this and you should definetely start writing more stories :D
4/7/2010 c1 1The Owls Made Me Do It
lol , that was brilliant (: , i love the plot , and i love the ending ! i was searching for any reo-based stories and only 2 came up as results (: , too bad though... , he would be a really good character to write about ^^ , i'm thinking of writing an AU fanfic about him ^^ , oh , and one question , where in gakuen alice does it say that he dies ? o.O , lol , i think i may have missed that part ^^
1The Owls Made Me Do Itlol , that was brilliant (: , i love the plot , and i love the ending ! i was searching for any reo-based stories and only 2 came up as results (: , too bad though... , he would be a really good character to write about ^^ , i'm thinking of writing an AU fanfic about him ^^ , oh , and one question , where in gakuen alice does it say that he dies ? o.O , lol , i think i may have missed that part ^^
11/19/2009 c1 Kok-chu
You... you mean the wet in wetting our bed?
Or the... one when you get... -Coughs- horny *_*
Oh well, I still like this, It's like,the only ReoxMikan story!
You... you mean the wet in wetting our bed?
Or the... one when you get... -Coughs- horny *_*
Oh well, I still like this, It's like,the only ReoxMikan story!
3/27/2009 c1 Andrea
It's weird that I have to read this story from someone else's POV. You could have use other names or people as the main character (not that it's wrong to use your own OC)so that we know how to picture the characters. But overall, it's a well-written story and I enjoyed it. Keep writing.
It's weird that I have to read this story from someone else's POV. You could have use other names or people as the main character (not that it's wrong to use your own OC)so that we know how to picture the characters. But overall, it's a well-written story and I enjoyed it. Keep writing.