for Mission of Chance6/23/2009 c12 paris
wow this story is great packed full of action great job update soon pls cant wait to see what happens next im hooked!
wow this story is great packed full of action great job update soon pls cant wait to see what happens next im hooked!
6/21/2009 c12 cb
awesome can't wait for more!LOL! Post more REALLY soon!
awesome can't wait for more!LOL! Post more REALLY soon!
6/20/2009 c12 sprinter1
psh way hit. haha dead on. that was an incrediblechapter! freaking awesome! ^_^ haha im so excited for chappy 13. cant wait! please update soon marvelous!
psh way hit. haha dead on. that was an incrediblechapter! freaking awesome! ^_^ haha im so excited for chappy 13. cant wait! please update soon marvelous!
6/20/2009 c12 EdwardCullenluver17
WOO! BADASS BELLA ROCKS! I love this chapter cuz, Bella kicks some serious ass. Who would've thunk that the sweet innocent Bella from the books, turned into this kick-ass, dagger wielding, neck snapping, ninja person? Awesome story && i cant wait for more! :)
WOO! BADASS BELLA ROCKS! I love this chapter cuz, Bella kicks some serious ass. Who would've thunk that the sweet innocent Bella from the books, turned into this kick-ass, dagger wielding, neck snapping, ninja person? Awesome story && i cant wait for more! :)
6/20/2009 c12 dontshinesparkle
love ur work!
please don't wait another month to update! I don't think I can wait that long!
great story!
xoxoxo
love ur work!
please don't wait another month to update! I don't think I can wait that long!
great story!
xoxoxo
5/30/2009 c11 sprinter1
ah shit total hit!haha i loved it. damn and just when they are starting to get along. wtf lol magnificent! please update son! awesome.
ah shit total hit!haha i loved it. damn and just when they are starting to get along. wtf lol magnificent! please update son! awesome.
5/28/2009 c11 
2pixidancer22
Ha ha ha. I loved how Emmett was so stinking proud of himslef! That was great.
OMG this ending was great! I loved all of the suspence and I am glad Eddie and Bellie talked better to eachother! Really can't wait for more;D
2pixidancer22Ha ha ha. I loved how Emmett was so stinking proud of himslef! That was great.
OMG this ending was great! I loved all of the suspence and I am glad Eddie and Bellie talked better to eachother! Really can't wait for more;D
5/28/2009 c11 twiliteroxuresox
HIT! RIGHT ON SPOT! loved it! and wow you update fast. or mayb its cuz i just started reading it yesterday. but u no... watev. lol update soon plze! this story rox! =]
HIT! RIGHT ON SPOT! loved it! and wow you update fast. or mayb its cuz i just started reading it yesterday. but u no... watev. lol update soon plze! this story rox! =]
5/28/2009 c11 whatwouldhappenifpieswereflies
please please please update as soon as possible i really like your story !
how long do youu think it will b before youu upate agaon ?
please please please update as soon as possible i really like your story !
how long do youu think it will b before youu upate agaon ?