for Mending Broken Wings9/4/2019 c9 
444JanetM74
Another excellent story. Loved the adaptations you made, the characters are so realistic and three-dimensional. Well done, would highly recommend.
444JanetM74Another excellent story. Loved the adaptations you made, the characters are so realistic and three-dimensional. Well done, would highly recommend.
9/4/2019 c4 JanetM74
Hahaha. So funny, I’m sitting on the bus crying with laughter.
I love how you portray and have developed each Tracy. Especially Gordon in this chapter
Hahaha. So funny, I’m sitting on the bus crying with laughter.
I love how you portray and have developed each Tracy. Especially Gordon in this chapter
3/10/2018 c9 2FMA lover912
I was reading this story for about the 5th time when something occurred to me. Allen, Tin-Tin and Fermat went into silo 1 to try to escape the Hood and his goons. The others were up in the space station at that point. So how could then have set the thrusters to go off if the Thunderbird was not there? Maybe I read the scene wrong but it just seemed off to me.
2FMA lover912I was reading this story for about the 5th time when something occurred to me. Allen, Tin-Tin and Fermat went into silo 1 to try to escape the Hood and his goons. The others were up in the space station at that point. So how could then have set the thrusters to go off if the Thunderbird was not there? Maybe I read the scene wrong but it just seemed off to me.
11/8/2017 c1 1Tracytron 54321
John hadn't fallen unconscious, he was seen awake and well as Thunderbird 4 and the monorail were surfacing. hold on a minute what about that scene where Jeff was holding an oxygen mask over John's face to keep him from fainting? although then again when Brain's screamed it woke him up and I think it woke John up to. although you still should have said "fallen unconious aboard Thunderbird 5" instead of TB3. idk I might have just found a plothole, I've gotta go back and rewatch this movie again. good god I have an unhealthy obsession with this movie why have I watched it so many goddamn fucking times lol.
1Tracytron 54321John hadn't fallen unconscious, he was seen awake and well as Thunderbird 4 and the monorail were surfacing. hold on a minute what about that scene where Jeff was holding an oxygen mask over John's face to keep him from fainting? although then again when Brain's screamed it woke him up and I think it woke John up to. although you still should have said "fallen unconious aboard Thunderbird 5" instead of TB3. idk I might have just found a plothole, I've gotta go back and rewatch this movie again. good god I have an unhealthy obsession with this movie why have I watched it so many goddamn fucking times lol.
9/3/2017 c9 91Madilayn
Just found this and I enjoyed it. Nicely done though I was getting a little tired of all the "cerulian orbs" and eye descriptions. But that's a style thing.
It was an engaging story, and your OC's were well rounded and thought out. Though - you did start out with Virgil as a Medic, and then suddenly he was a Dr!
I would leave him as a Medic (or even an Advanced Paramedic).
I loved your characterisations of the Tracy males and how you gave us the character that the older boys weren't given in the '04 movie. AND you stopped Alkan being a whiny little brat (I love you for that).
PLUS I got my wonderful Scott being big brotherly, ex-military and that is the BEST.
91MadilaynJust found this and I enjoyed it. Nicely done though I was getting a little tired of all the "cerulian orbs" and eye descriptions. But that's a style thing.
It was an engaging story, and your OC's were well rounded and thought out. Though - you did start out with Virgil as a Medic, and then suddenly he was a Dr!
I would leave him as a Medic (or even an Advanced Paramedic).
I loved your characterisations of the Tracy males and how you gave us the character that the older boys weren't given in the '04 movie. AND you stopped Alkan being a whiny little brat (I love you for that).
PLUS I got my wonderful Scott being big brotherly, ex-military and that is the BEST.
12/18/2016 c9 40Fanofeverything101
I love this story! I heard that you had a story where Alan gets Scarlett Fever? Do you have it up somewhere? Cause I would LOVE to read it!
40Fanofeverything101I love this story! I heard that you had a story where Alan gets Scarlett Fever? Do you have it up somewhere? Cause I would LOVE to read it!
4/1/2015 c9 nim draug
Well done x
Well done x
12/9/2014 c9 Guest
Brilliant more please x
Brilliant more please x
6/12/2014 c6 Luzith
Luuuuuuuuve it! Great job! And thanks for fixing the age order - it was totally bugging me that the film switched it. And, as far as feedback goes, I noticed that you seemed to stick to one perspective in the later chapters, but there was a lot of scenes with multiple perspectives (thoughts/feeling/etc.) in the earlier chapters. It can make a narrative more disjointed. Switching between scenes is a great tool, but within a scene it can be confusing.
Luuuuuuuuve it! Great job! And thanks for fixing the age order - it was totally bugging me that the film switched it. And, as far as feedback goes, I noticed that you seemed to stick to one perspective in the later chapters, but there was a lot of scenes with multiple perspectives (thoughts/feeling/etc.) in the earlier chapters. It can make a narrative more disjointed. Switching between scenes is a great tool, but within a scene it can be confusing.
8/28/2013 c9 OceanBlueSpirit
Great story! I really loved it! Well done, all the brotherly connections were great and I loved how Alan was able to open up to his brothers and let them in to help him rather than deal with everything himself. Really great work. :)
Great story! I really loved it! Well done, all the brotherly connections were great and I loved how Alan was able to open up to his brothers and let them in to help him rather than deal with everything himself. Really great work. :)
3/19/2013 c9 23UnpredictablyRandomOne
*tear*
Bravo, Little Miss Bump. Bravo. I loved this story so much! You're definitely one of my top favorite authors! You have this way of keeping me interested in every detail and that's really important to me. Great job!
I know it's been a couple of years since your last story and I'm not even sure if you stil log in here but I'ma tell you anyways... Thank you for posting such incredible stories. They always make me smile and cherish my family a little bit more each chapter. lol
I know you have The Price of Paradise, which I will get to as well but I had really hoped for a story surrounding Gordon after his hydrofoil accident. I've read whatever few there are but I know I would have loved one from you. -sigh-
Like I said, I don't know if you'll even see my reviews but if you do, know that after all these years, you still make people smile. Thank you!
23UnpredictablyRandomOne*tear*
Bravo, Little Miss Bump. Bravo. I loved this story so much! You're definitely one of my top favorite authors! You have this way of keeping me interested in every detail and that's really important to me. Great job!
I know it's been a couple of years since your last story and I'm not even sure if you stil log in here but I'ma tell you anyways... Thank you for posting such incredible stories. They always make me smile and cherish my family a little bit more each chapter. lol
I know you have The Price of Paradise, which I will get to as well but I had really hoped for a story surrounding Gordon after his hydrofoil accident. I've read whatever few there are but I know I would have loved one from you. -sigh-
Like I said, I don't know if you'll even see my reviews but if you do, know that after all these years, you still make people smile. Thank you!