
3/22/2009 c1 UpYourCupcake
OMG this is the cutest first chapter ever!
And if that old lady was my kids nanny, I would have beat the shit out of her wrinkly face. She had nerve speaking like that in front of kids.
How cute that Edwards kids are so taken with her =) You made them sound absolutely adorable.
OMG this is the cutest first chapter ever!
And if that old lady was my kids nanny, I would have beat the shit out of her wrinkly face. She had nerve speaking like that in front of kids.
How cute that Edwards kids are so taken with her =) You made them sound absolutely adorable.
3/21/2009 c1 u2ugly2nv
I love it already... I so want to read more. update soon. I never heard of that book. but it seems like a good one.
I love it already... I so want to read more. update soon. I never heard of that book. but it seems like a good one.
3/20/2009 c1 Stallion0805
very, VERY long but also very good, I hope you update soon,
and good luck writing, hope you get nice reviews
- Jennifer
very, VERY long but also very good, I hope you update soon,
and good luck writing, hope you get nice reviews
- Jennifer
3/19/2009 c1 ajenc
I like the concept of your story. I hope that you continue it. It seems like you will have lots of fun wit it.
I like the concept of your story. I hope that you continue it. It seems like you will have lots of fun wit it.
3/19/2009 c1 THExBESTxNINJAxEVER
LOVE IT! plz tell me ur one of those authors who updates regularly, cuz it gets really annoying when authors dont update often.
so...UPDATE SOON!
LOVE IT! plz tell me ur one of those authors who updates regularly, cuz it gets really annoying when authors dont update often.
so...UPDATE SOON!
3/19/2009 c1
4Kerry Hale
You are off to a wonderful start. Love your story so far. I love th afact the Edward's kids love Bella already.. Can't wait to read more

You are off to a wonderful start. Love your story so far. I love th afact the Edward's kids love Bella already.. Can't wait to read more
3/19/2009 c1 NoLongerAnAccount00
Edwards kids are ADORABLE! I love stories with little kids in them but i have to say that you write them the best: they are ADORABLE! (I have never used a completely capitalized "ADORABLE" in a review before and here i go writing it twice in one review!) I like the plot, it sounds so unique! Cliched Fanfiction plots get so boring this story seems refreshing! UPDATE SOON...please...:D
Edwards kids are ADORABLE! I love stories with little kids in them but i have to say that you write them the best: they are ADORABLE! (I have never used a completely capitalized "ADORABLE" in a review before and here i go writing it twice in one review!) I like the plot, it sounds so unique! Cliched Fanfiction plots get so boring this story seems refreshing! UPDATE SOON...please...:D
3/19/2009 c1
5someweirdgirl
honestly I think the plot is a little overused but I liked it non the less and your writing is really good. I hope you do something to make the plot line your own though.

honestly I think the plot is a little overused but I liked it non the less and your writing is really good. I hope you do something to make the plot line your own though.