for What Once Was7/1/2009 c1 cmunoz.22
I know that in the movie Sarah does
not come into the picture until she
transfers during her senior year,
but I guess you can do what you want
with her =)
It would be great if the chapters can
be a bit longer.
Cynthia
I know that in the movie Sarah does
not come into the picture until she
transfers during her senior year,
but I guess you can do what you want
with her =)
It would be great if the chapters can
be a bit longer.
Cynthia
3/23/2009 c1 
3imaginative-dreamer
glad i could help with the whole posting process. about your story, yea, alchemistic is right. It's really short so i can't really comment anything about it. So, just post more on your next chapter and then we'll see how it goes.
3imaginative-dreamerglad i could help with the whole posting process. about your story, yea, alchemistic is right. It's really short so i can't really comment anything about it. So, just post more on your next chapter and then we'll see how it goes.
3/22/2009 c1 2alchemistic
okay, im confused. there was nothing at the end of this that made me excited or want to read more and it was too short for anyybody to really have an opinion. you should certainly try making longer chapters and such...luckily, i will never read something then forget about it. so when you put your next chapter i will read it and i will stay with you until the end of youur story and be yoour first fan.
2alchemisticokay, im confused. there was nothing at the end of this that made me excited or want to read more and it was too short for anyybody to really have an opinion. you should certainly try making longer chapters and such...luckily, i will never read something then forget about it. so when you put your next chapter i will read it and i will stay with you until the end of youur story and be yoour first fan.