for Love Hinata2/19 c2 Gabross
No me gustaría que se añdiera a alguien mas solo a naruto y hinata y de masiado buena la historia
No me gustaría que se añdiera a alguien mas solo a naruto y hinata y de masiado buena la historia
1/10 c11 Flying Thunder God of the Leaf
The nine tails cloak better make an appearance in the next chapter
The nine tails cloak better make an appearance in the next chapter
1/10 c6 Flying Thunder God of the Leaf
I had to take a small break from the slapping her butt part and that's when he knew he fucked up
I had to take a small break from the slapping her butt part and that's when he knew he fucked up
11/13/2020 c1 Guest
Sérieux est ce que tsunade était obligée de dire à hiashi que naruto avait vu sa fille nue
Sérieux est ce que tsunade était obligée de dire à hiashi que naruto avait vu sa fille nue
9/1/2020 c28 Guest
I just don't know what to say. The story was the BEST, you started it with an interesting concept, and immediately caught my attention. I read 27 chapters in 1 day. Then after realising it was unfinished, I was in a smaller shock for 20 minutes. This was my 2 story that I started reading, after the first was unfinished too. I know it's stupid to write a story that you have no interest in anymore, but from the notes last line, it's obvious that you had an idea for at least a chapter. I saw that the tale of the three maidens got updated recently, but is's T rated so idk... If you merged the 2 stories and continued that, please, at least leave a note here. Or give us some alternate ending from that... But please, close this story(1 short chapter would be more than enough) , it deserves it. ( I saw your rant, and I don't want to push anything, it's just my opinion(and begging)). Sorry for the long review, but I usually don't write reviews. Heading for Beki's story, I hope I find the ending there.
I just don't know what to say. The story was the BEST, you started it with an interesting concept, and immediately caught my attention. I read 27 chapters in 1 day. Then after realising it was unfinished, I was in a smaller shock for 20 minutes. This was my 2 story that I started reading, after the first was unfinished too. I know it's stupid to write a story that you have no interest in anymore, but from the notes last line, it's obvious that you had an idea for at least a chapter. I saw that the tale of the three maidens got updated recently, but is's T rated so idk... If you merged the 2 stories and continued that, please, at least leave a note here. Or give us some alternate ending from that... But please, close this story(1 short chapter would be more than enough) , it deserves it. ( I saw your rant, and I don't want to push anything, it's just my opinion(and begging)). Sorry for the long review, but I usually don't write reviews. Heading for Beki's story, I hope I find the ending there.
8/24/2020 c1 iacopo.passerini
Ah ecco qua un problema, Naruto fa una cosa stupida ma piena di speranza e Hinata è nei guai!
Ah ecco qua un problema, Naruto fa una cosa stupida ma piena di speranza e Hinata è nei guai!
8/21/2020 c28 Erangel
It was really nice i cant wait for chapter nine
It was really nice i cant wait for chapter nine
6/1/2020 c28 leedle
Write more.
Write more.
5/9/2020 c27 Guest
Great man you did well
We also appreciate you taking your precious time to write a fanfic for us Thanks again
Great man you did well
We also appreciate you taking your precious time to write a fanfic for us Thanks again
9/22/2019 c28 moka1023
Wow! Lol Hinata is no longer a virgin but Naruto still is. I love it! I encourage those who have not read sister story to this one "The Tale if the Three Maidens" to do so. I am 41 chapters in an loving the story. Beki is an awesome character and I can't wait to see more of her in this story as well. You and your wife are doung a great job with these stories and I encourage you to keep at it. Just so you know I am a HUGE Naruhina fan so will always becoming back here for more. Thank you for all your time and effort!
Wow! Lol Hinata is no longer a virgin but Naruto still is. I love it! I encourage those who have not read sister story to this one "The Tale if the Three Maidens" to do so. I am 41 chapters in an loving the story. Beki is an awesome character and I can't wait to see more of her in this story as well. You and your wife are doung a great job with these stories and I encourage you to keep at it. Just so you know I am a HUGE Naruhina fan so will always becoming back here for more. Thank you for all your time and effort!
8/1/2019 c28 Guest
pH come on! You gotta right more soon!
pH come on! You gotta right more soon!
7/31/2019 c28 CombinationLockout
Amazing story. I hope you didn't give up on this story, though I completely understand if you did. Like you said, writing canon things is boring.
And you stayed true to the characters pretty much. It's hard to do that. A lot of writers fail to accomplish it. But you got that down packed. Good job.
Amazing story. I hope you didn't give up on this story, though I completely understand if you did. Like you said, writing canon things is boring.
And you stayed true to the characters pretty much. It's hard to do that. A lot of writers fail to accomplish it. But you got that down packed. Good job.
4/24/2019 c6 Phenom
This is the most funniest fanfic I've ever read..
LMAOThanks bro you made my day!
This is the most funniest fanfic I've ever read..
LMAOThanks bro you made my day!