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5/21/2012 c2 8CassieMichele
Are you going to upload? If not please tell me i would love to adopt it!
5/17/2010 c2 1RuneDeer
Glad Hatsumomo is "toast." Burnt toast would be better. I'm about 3/4 through the book. Her downfall was most enjoyable.
8/22/2009 c2 6pearberry14
i like this. update?
8/6/2009 c2 180Thorn In Your Side
E, I like it~

But I need to point out something about your writing style; while it is similar to the author's own prose, it lacks the similies and things that make it an interesting read. This reads almost like a report; I think it'd be nice to see a little more emotion from a first person Chiyo.
7/20/2009 c1 ali
that was horrible of Chiyo. I've always felt sorry for Hatsumomo, despite all her faults.
3/26/2009 c1 Thorn In Your Side
If only little Chiyo was that smart...

It was good, but it was bland. You could've extended it to make it funny...

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