for The So Unknown1/2 c24 Crissy
Ahhhh! That was perfection, the last couple of chapters were frustrating, people really need to remove their heads from their behinds LoL but again, so good I couldn't put it down. Bravo!
Ahhhh! That was perfection, the last couple of chapters were frustrating, people really need to remove their heads from their behinds LoL but again, so good I couldn't put it down. Bravo!
1/1 c15 Crissy
I am balling my eyes out at this choice Jasper/Bella is my favorite pairing. I firmly believe they should have been the cannon couple. I can't put this story down. But right now I'm also utterly heartbroken. They just have to have a hea
I am balling my eyes out at this choice Jasper/Bella is my favorite pairing. I firmly believe they should have been the cannon couple. I can't put this story down. But right now I'm also utterly heartbroken. They just have to have a hea
6/19/2024 c24 
40tigersmeleth
This was heartbreaking, beautiful, and satisfying. The relationship between Jasper and Bella felt very natural, and how you got all of the characters to work together was utterly refreshing. I love that Edward was not an off the rails psychopath, that Jake was a good and gracious man, that Alice is Alice and still lovable. I love that while I absolutely was rooting for Jasper and Bella to work out, my heart broke for Edward and Alice. I love that you wrote this whole thing so well, I was crying for the last few chapters because I was able to get into everyone's heads and just feel. I love that not matter what the pairings would have been at the end, it still would have been a satisfying story.
40tigersmelethThis was heartbreaking, beautiful, and satisfying. The relationship between Jasper and Bella felt very natural, and how you got all of the characters to work together was utterly refreshing. I love that Edward was not an off the rails psychopath, that Jake was a good and gracious man, that Alice is Alice and still lovable. I love that while I absolutely was rooting for Jasper and Bella to work out, my heart broke for Edward and Alice. I love that you wrote this whole thing so well, I was crying for the last few chapters because I was able to get into everyone's heads and just feel. I love that not matter what the pairings would have been at the end, it still would have been a satisfying story.
6/16/2024 c8 Guest
I really do hate jake he’s kind of annoying
I really do hate jake he’s kind of annoying
6/16/2024 c7 Guest
I love this
I love this
6/16/2024 c6 Guest
I love this maybe the can go to a lake or something
I love this maybe the can go to a lake or something
2/24/2024 c24 redhotlady7552
Well...this could have gone better. They screwed up, when they thought going back to Alice, and Edward would fix things. All that did, was mess everything up. They should have known better. I'm glad they got back together in the end, but it shouldn't have taken that long.
Well...this could have gone better. They screwed up, when they thought going back to Alice, and Edward would fix things. All that did, was mess everything up. They should have known better. I'm glad they got back together in the end, but it shouldn't have taken that long.
6/27/2023 c24 Silmara
This fanfic is amazing. I always come here to read when I am feeling like Jasper/Bella. Unfortunately I don't know many good fics with this pairing. Thank you for writing this
This fanfic is amazing. I always come here to read when I am feeling like Jasper/Bella. Unfortunately I don't know many good fics with this pairing. Thank you for writing this
5/24/2023 c13 KimberlyJho-ann
oh man! Jasper is friend with the Wolf and I love it! I bet Jacob tolerate him more than he does Eddie boy.
oh man! Jasper is friend with the Wolf and I love it! I bet Jacob tolerate him more than he does Eddie boy.