
2/14/2023 c15
11Maggie Davis
Before I forget because I’m so bad at reviewing…. This is an incredible story! I haven’t even finished it and I can barely put my iPad down to stop reading it. It is so well thought out and I just love it. I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Before I forget because I’m so bad at reviewing…. This is an incredible story! I haven’t even finished it and I can barely put my iPad down to stop reading it. It is so well thought out and I just love it. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
7/22/2022 c22 Iamthehungrysharkxx
Isn’t she doing to jasper (and everyone else) very similar to what Edward did to her?
Isn’t she doing to jasper (and everyone else) very similar to what Edward did to her?
7/22/2022 c21 Iamthehungrysharkxx
I’m dead…. Where was this backbone when Edward was trying to just take control of her again? *sobbing emoji*
I’m dead…. Where was this backbone when Edward was trying to just take control of her again? *sobbing emoji*
7/21/2022 c16 Iamthehungrysharkxx
Ok but the absolute AUDACITY of edward. I want to hit him with a 2x4. Love this!
Ok but the absolute AUDACITY of edward. I want to hit him with a 2x4. Love this!
7/2/2022 c1 rossales63
I really like this story and I wanted to know if you would allow me to post its translation in Portuguese on wattpad, I would leave all her credits to you of course, there are very few stories of this couple in Portuguese and it would be good to post for those who like this couple too (sorry if you didn't understand something i wrote, i'm using google translate)
I really like this story and I wanted to know if you would allow me to post its translation in Portuguese on wattpad, I would leave all her credits to you of course, there are very few stories of this couple in Portuguese and it would be good to post for those who like this couple too (sorry if you didn't understand something i wrote, i'm using google translate)
4/30/2022 c1 Artemis Mary Jackson
When Bella says "No, think about something else," it was 100% accurate. I lost my grandmother just 6 days ago and yesterday was her burial, and I find myself saying "no" out loud and "think about something else" in my head. I say those things to stop me from panicking and stop me from crying especially during classes. I am sorry Author for whomever you lost.
When Bella says "No, think about something else," it was 100% accurate. I lost my grandmother just 6 days ago and yesterday was her burial, and I find myself saying "no" out loud and "think about something else" in my head. I say those things to stop me from panicking and stop me from crying especially during classes. I am sorry Author for whomever you lost.
3/30/2022 c12 Kimberley Clay
N[oooooooooooooo. The story is ruined now that alice and edward are back. Dammit
N[oooooooooooooo. The story is ruined now that alice and edward are back. Dammit
3/30/2022 c11 Kimberley Clay
I've always thought bella and jasper were better suited. I don't want alice to interfere. Hes much better for bella than edward
I've always thought bella and jasper were better suited. I don't want alice to interfere. Hes much better for bella than edward
2/28/2022 c24 turquoisecherryblossom
i've really enjoyed reading this story. you've portrayed jasper's and bella's emotions so well that you reduced me to a mess of tears and sniffles at least five times. i would have been quite angry if jasper and bella didn't get their happy ending, but, as it turns out, you've managed to give them the best ending possible for this story. i've loved reading this and it's been a novel experience for me. thank you for providing everybody with this wonderful, wonderful story!
i've really enjoyed reading this story. you've portrayed jasper's and bella's emotions so well that you reduced me to a mess of tears and sniffles at least five times. i would have been quite angry if jasper and bella didn't get their happy ending, but, as it turns out, you've managed to give them the best ending possible for this story. i've loved reading this and it's been a novel experience for me. thank you for providing everybody with this wonderful, wonderful story!