for The So Unknown4/2/2021 c20 Lemonmelons
I loved this story.
But if Jasper is still carrying confederate flags around with him - it means he still hasn't reflected what it was exactly he was fighting for - or that he really felt inclined to fight for the right to enslave people. A confederate lighter a prized possession... It's different than keeping his medals, reminders of his personal life.
That... In this whole story, racism isn't ever mentioned. Together, that leaves a very bitter taste.
I loved this story.
But if Jasper is still carrying confederate flags around with him - it means he still hasn't reflected what it was exactly he was fighting for - or that he really felt inclined to fight for the right to enslave people. A confederate lighter a prized possession... It's different than keeping his medals, reminders of his personal life.
That... In this whole story, racism isn't ever mentioned. Together, that leaves a very bitter taste.
4/2/2021 c12 Lemonmelons
Oh no.
I'm glad they already have been thinking about the possibility of moving more than one person - I hope it will help them all.
Oh no.
I'm glad they already have been thinking about the possibility of moving more than one person - I hope it will help them all.
1/28/2021 c13 Guest
Ugh! Now I want Alice and Jasper to be together! I don’t care too much about Edward but I also want him and Bella to work out for Alice’s sake... But I think the best scenario would be for Alice and Edward to start dating and love each other very much so that Jasper and Bella can live in peace without hurting anyone (except Jacob)
Ugh! Now I want Alice and Jasper to be together! I don’t care too much about Edward but I also want him and Bella to work out for Alice’s sake... But I think the best scenario would be for Alice and Edward to start dating and love each other very much so that Jasper and Bella can live in peace without hurting anyone (except Jacob)
1/28/2021 c11 Guest
I’m living it and find their relationship adorable. I don’t find it cheesy at all and I don’t want soldering to get between them but I understand that the story would probably get boring if there were no problems
I’m living it and find their relationship adorable. I don’t find it cheesy at all and I don’t want soldering to get between them but I understand that the story would probably get boring if there were no problems
1/27/2021 c5 Guest
I love this soooooo much!
It is written so well and the story is overwhelmingly interesting! I am neglecting my school work to read this and I get so engrossed in the book
I love this soooooo much!
It is written so well and the story is overwhelmingly interesting! I am neglecting my school work to read this and I get so engrossed in the book
1/16/2021 c16 Lola
I read Jaspe my heart turn into a million pieces
I am going to cry, oh no
I read Jaspe my heart turn into a million pieces
I am going to cry, oh no
1/15/2021 c11 Lola
Oh fuck
Oh fuck
1/15/2021 c1 Lola
I love it
I love it
11/16/2020 c24 Lila
I JUST FINISHED IT AND OMG. Roller coaster my ass that was a whole damn theme park of ups and down. I cried laughed got angry. You did an amazing job righting this story and i sincerely thank you for making it possible for me and many other people to enjoy it:)
I JUST FINISHED IT AND OMG. Roller coaster my ass that was a whole damn theme park of ups and down. I cried laughed got angry. You did an amazing job righting this story and i sincerely thank you for making it possible for me and many other people to enjoy it:)
11/15/2020 c12 Guest
I'm just on chapter 12 and i know this qas written a while back but this is really good, its different from other bella jasper stories. Like in others it's always alice is already with edward and stuff, but I like how you made it practically a love affair situation but not really. If your reading the story you know what i mean lol. But you did a great job so far
I'm just on chapter 12 and i know this qas written a while back but this is really good, its different from other bella jasper stories. Like in others it's always alice is already with edward and stuff, but I like how you made it practically a love affair situation but not really. If your reading the story you know what i mean lol. But you did a great job so far
10/25/2020 c1 
5LdyJulanna
Talk about an emotional roller coaster ride! And I literally almost had a heart attack when certain people showed up. Thank you for the very entertaining read. :-) Although I will admit that at some points it did make me want to just reach through the screen and wish I could not after heads together.
5LdyJulannaTalk about an emotional roller coaster ride! And I literally almost had a heart attack when certain people showed up. Thank you for the very entertaining read. :-) Although I will admit that at some points it did make me want to just reach through the screen and wish I could not after heads together.
7/22/2020 c23 2vampdreams
Oh I loved this fic!
It made me happy and also made me cry
The fact that Edward and Alice didn't suddenly turn into vicious harpies and were still as lovable as always, in love with our duo but stepping out, and still maintaining their friendship, I just!
Most authors villainize Alice and Edward in a JxE story to make it easier for themselves to write them, in a way that justifies Jasper and Bella's relationship
I absolutely adore the fact that you didn't go down that way, and my heart hurt so much in the last couple chapters for the both of them
This was brilliant!
I also really enjoyed the fact that Jake and Jasper got along so well.
"I conquered my thirst, made friends with my mortal enemy and even faced Charlie" indeed.
I loved that dinner too, that Jasper cooked for Charlie and Bella, and that Charlie so obviously approved of Jasper!
Bella's friendships with Angela and Emily were something I enjoyed greatly.
Just so many things to make this fic absolutely brilliant!
Now this comment has gone long enough, so I'll stop now
Thanks for sharing _
So, I tried commenting on the fic and realized I've already read and commented 5 years back!
Loved it equally this time around
2vampdreamsOh I loved this fic!
It made me happy and also made me cry
The fact that Edward and Alice didn't suddenly turn into vicious harpies and were still as lovable as always, in love with our duo but stepping out, and still maintaining their friendship, I just!
Most authors villainize Alice and Edward in a JxE story to make it easier for themselves to write them, in a way that justifies Jasper and Bella's relationship
I absolutely adore the fact that you didn't go down that way, and my heart hurt so much in the last couple chapters for the both of them
This was brilliant!
I also really enjoyed the fact that Jake and Jasper got along so well.
"I conquered my thirst, made friends with my mortal enemy and even faced Charlie" indeed.
I loved that dinner too, that Jasper cooked for Charlie and Bella, and that Charlie so obviously approved of Jasper!
Bella's friendships with Angela and Emily were something I enjoyed greatly.
Just so many things to make this fic absolutely brilliant!
Now this comment has gone long enough, so I'll stop now
Thanks for sharing _
So, I tried commenting on the fic and realized I've already read and commented 5 years back!
Loved it equally this time around
6/5/2020 c9 Guest
It is fun story and greatly written. But Bella does not wash herself before sleeping? All the time Jasper tells her to shower. Ew, how unhygienic, is she girl really? I understand it is because of vampire/werewolf conflict, but...
It is fun story and greatly written. But Bella does not wash herself before sleeping? All the time Jasper tells her to shower. Ew, how unhygienic, is she girl really? I understand it is because of vampire/werewolf conflict, but...