for Owning My heart4/26/2010 c3 
7AnnabethnAliceLuvr
this one's my favorite. i LUVd how it tells about how not every1's perfect and the fact that u shouldn't judge some1 by their looks or watever (like it sed in the beginning)
2 awesome job!
7AnnabethnAliceLuvrthis one's my favorite. i LUVd how it tells about how not every1's perfect and the fact that u shouldn't judge some1 by their looks or watever (like it sed in the beginning)
2 awesome job!
4/26/2010 c2 AnnabethnAliceLuvr
i liked how the chorus sort of thing rhymed (ther, listening, care...)
cool :D
i liked how the chorus sort of thing rhymed (ther, listening, care...)
cool :D
4/26/2010 c1 AnnabethnAliceLuvr
i really LUVd it. it could use more descriptive words but it doesn't matter. i LUVd the line about the million pieces but they still belong 2 u thing.
i rite my owns songs 2 but theyre hore-ree-bull and not really finished (well, 1 out of like the 10 r...)
i really liked it :D
i really LUVd it. it could use more descriptive words but it doesn't matter. i LUVd the line about the million pieces but they still belong 2 u thing.
i rite my owns songs 2 but theyre hore-ree-bull and not really finished (well, 1 out of like the 10 r...)
i really liked it :D
3/25/2009 c3 fabm21
wow, this chapter goes pretty deep,i think it's cool!
i mean the whole chapter or err song is nice
wow, this chapter goes pretty deep,i think it's cool!
i mean the whole chapter or err song is nice
3/25/2009 c3 4Volleyballgirl1112
aw. sad. really good though! ill say it again. you . are. talented. keep it up1 im loving it!
4Volleyballgirl1112aw. sad. really good though! ill say it again. you . are. talented. keep it up1 im loving it!
3/25/2009 c2 Volleyballgirl1112
aww. its sad. : ( but VERY well written. you seriously have some really big talent. i know I couldnt make up a song like that. more power to ya! lol. so aanyways... i cant wait for the next one!
aww. its sad. : ( but VERY well written. you seriously have some really big talent. i know I couldnt make up a song like that. more power to ya! lol. so aanyways... i cant wait for the next one!
3/24/2009 c1 AliceXxJasper
I love your lyrics, its a beautiful song, a few spelling mistakes but apart from that I LOVED IT!
I love your lyrics, its a beautiful song, a few spelling mistakes but apart from that I LOVED IT!
3/24/2009 c1 GamerGirlFromHell
That was so AMWSOME I think you could have a future ar a song writer and I'm saying that after reading 1 song but hey I love it and it reminds me of my life kinda.
That was so AMWSOME I think you could have a future ar a song writer and I'm saying that after reading 1 song but hey I love it and it reminds me of my life kinda.
3/24/2009 c1 Volleyballgirl1112
aw. its really good! i love it! you should definately write more songs!then you could add them as chapters! i would def. read them. good job!
aw. its really good! i love it! you should definately write more songs!then you could add them as chapters! i would def. read them. good job!
3/24/2009 c1 fabm21
nice song, its not bad
i think that u cud be good at poetry...i just think u shud have a few more rhyming words if this wud be a poem, but as a song...its cool...um i have a question..do u play an instrument? to accompany sumone's voice in dis song?
nice song, its not bad
i think that u cud be good at poetry...i just think u shud have a few more rhyming words if this wud be a poem, but as a song...its cool...um i have a question..do u play an instrument? to accompany sumone's voice in dis song?