for Forever We Stay Changing6/30/2010 c5 
10n7shoujo
This.. is a really good story. Way better than any I've seen. (I've been stalking stories XD)
I'd love to know if you'd update for this.
-DM
10n7shoujoThis.. is a really good story. Way better than any I've seen. (I've been stalking stories XD)
I'd love to know if you'd update for this.
-DM
12/22/2009 c5 6HinaLuvLuvChan
OMG! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I totally wana read more! Please udate soon! I wanna see how everyone's gonna react to her pj's lolz!
6HinaLuvLuvChanOMG! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I totally wana read more! Please udate soon! I wanna see how everyone's gonna react to her pj's lolz!
11/12/2009 c5 2Squidster
I love this story! There aren't enough rune factory fanfics and most of them are one shots. I like your story line so far and really want to find out what happens next! But i hate reveiws that just tell you to update so heres my constructive critisism :)
I like how youre describing outfits now. some authors go over the top with descriptions but at the beginning i was eager to get a picture in my mind what her stunning outfit looked like but you never gave a discription!
make your chapters a little longer. right now your chapters are good but adding more description and perhaps more dialouge or little tangents. That way the readers have a little more to chew through before they start getting oh so eager for your updates :)
I understand the hecticness (if thats a word) and look forward to the next chapter - please update soon!
2SquidsterI love this story! There aren't enough rune factory fanfics and most of them are one shots. I like your story line so far and really want to find out what happens next! But i hate reveiws that just tell you to update so heres my constructive critisism :)
I like how youre describing outfits now. some authors go over the top with descriptions but at the beginning i was eager to get a picture in my mind what her stunning outfit looked like but you never gave a discription!
make your chapters a little longer. right now your chapters are good but adding more description and perhaps more dialouge or little tangents. That way the readers have a little more to chew through before they start getting oh so eager for your updates :)
I understand the hecticness (if thats a word) and look forward to the next chapter - please update soon!
8/26/2009 c5 11WorthWaitingFor
I really like this! I couldn't picture Aria as an teenager until I read this!:)
11WorthWaitingForI really like this! I couldn't picture Aria as an teenager until I read this!:)
8/24/2009 c5 2Sleepysloth91
Ah another good chapter, I'm glad to hear from you. It's been a while. I don't mind waiting though.
I'm not really familiar with dining manners myself, I would probably be just like Roy and just slerp my soup. Actually I do slerp my soup lol. Maybe I could use one of those lessons for when I have to eat someplace fancy. Orland really is cute trying to copy her though.
I'm rather fond of low-cut clothes myself hehe. Well I really enjoyed this chapter. I'll be right here waiting for another.
2Sleepysloth91Ah another good chapter, I'm glad to hear from you. It's been a while. I don't mind waiting though.
I'm not really familiar with dining manners myself, I would probably be just like Roy and just slerp my soup. Actually I do slerp my soup lol. Maybe I could use one of those lessons for when I have to eat someplace fancy. Orland really is cute trying to copy her though.
I'm rather fond of low-cut clothes myself hehe. Well I really enjoyed this chapter. I'll be right here waiting for another.
8/19/2009 c5 solosinger1
Thanks for using my suggestions and thanks for updating quickly keep up the good work!
Thanks for using my suggestions and thanks for updating quickly keep up the good work!
8/18/2009 c4 solosinger1
Defiantly more Orland/Aria and hm...make some jealousy from Orland just not too much.
Defiantly more Orland/Aria and hm...make some jealousy from Orland just not too much.
6/16/2009 c4 7AngelGaby
haha, "i will scream at the next mention of ice" that was funny! i would like to see the dinner... just imagining Roy´s table manners cracks me up! hope you update soon :)
oh and maybe you can include a kiss in a future chap?
7AngelGabyhaha, "i will scream at the next mention of ice" that was funny! i would like to see the dinner... just imagining Roy´s table manners cracks me up! hope you update soon :)
oh and maybe you can include a kiss in a future chap?
5/27/2009 c4 5Mossmoon
Write the dinner, please. I want to hear about everyone's table manners. It would be interesting (and funny).
Aria is acting the way I think that she would act and Orland is the way he was supposed to be. I wonder if they will kiss anytime soon.
5MossmoonWrite the dinner, please. I want to hear about everyone's table manners. It would be interesting (and funny).
Aria is acting the way I think that she would act and Orland is the way he was supposed to be. I wonder if they will kiss anytime soon.
5/26/2009 c4 2Sleepysloth91
It`s bit longer this time yay. My favorite part was probably the whole dancing thing. You are getting much better.
2Sleepysloth91It`s bit longer this time yay. My favorite part was probably the whole dancing thing. You are getting much better.
5/26/2009 c4 8Cass The Homicidal Maniac
I will scream at the next mention of ice XD XD XD That was hilarious
and a relatively adorable chapter! E! The dancing part was SO much fun! WHEE!
and Roy's going to sleep in JUST a pair of boxers? LOL XD XD XD
PLEASE continue! PLEASE! I AM ON MY KNEES!
Cass
8Cass The Homicidal ManiacI will scream at the next mention of ice XD XD XD That was hilarious
and a relatively adorable chapter! E! The dancing part was SO much fun! WHEE!
and Roy's going to sleep in JUST a pair of boxers? LOL XD XD XD
PLEASE continue! PLEASE! I AM ON MY KNEES!
Cass
5/24/2009 c3 Cass The Homicidal Maniac
This is REALLY good
Too bad I couldn't find the pic. could u send the link to me (be sure to add spaces)
Can't wait for her party! *starts dancin* lol
This is REALLY good
Too bad I couldn't find the pic. could u send the link to me (be sure to add spaces)
Can't wait for her party! *starts dancin* lol