
2/24/2010 c1
9xXthenextbookwormXx
I can imagine how amusing it would be... *Giggles* She has a heart as big as the world, dosen't she? I like it. This does show their personalities so well!

I can imagine how amusing it would be... *Giggles* She has a heart as big as the world, dosen't she? I like it. This does show their personalities so well!
7/1/2009 c1 Meit00
Nice. As someone who doesn't even know that much about the Inuyasha series, I have to say this short story has given me a good feel for the characters' personalities already. Good job ^_^
Nice. As someone who doesn't even know that much about the Inuyasha series, I have to say this short story has given me a good feel for the characters' personalities already. Good job ^_^
4/6/2009 c1
3Summer Jasmine
haha, cute. I could really see Inuyasha trying to ride a bike that would be hilarious! XD

haha, cute. I could really see Inuyasha trying to ride a bike that would be hilarious! XD
4/4/2009 c1
73leshamarieinuyasha
I never thought about Kagome teaching inu to ride a bike before. It was really good. I found myself laughing along with Kagome, but also wanting to give inu a hug. He's so cute when he's mad. You portrayed his character perfectly. I only wish I could have seen this in the manga and in the show...
I also wish in hadn't given up. Great job!

I never thought about Kagome teaching inu to ride a bike before. It was really good. I found myself laughing along with Kagome, but also wanting to give inu a hug. He's so cute when he's mad. You portrayed his character perfectly. I only wish I could have seen this in the manga and in the show...
I also wish in hadn't given up. Great job!
4/2/2009 c1
96Gindokei
Poor Inuyasha... I guess riding a bike is something that comes naturally to us humans! xP
A very sweet and original little one-shot. Inuyasha never seems to like Kagome's bike much... but he probably would want to try to ride it! I think it's cute how Kagome is almost motherly with him, showing him how to seat himself and how to put his feet on the pedals.
I did catch one spelling mistake - it's 'eighth', not 'eigth' - but otherwise, pretty good grammar, too!
I look forward to seeing new stories from you. (:
~ Dream

Poor Inuyasha... I guess riding a bike is something that comes naturally to us humans! xP
A very sweet and original little one-shot. Inuyasha never seems to like Kagome's bike much... but he probably would want to try to ride it! I think it's cute how Kagome is almost motherly with him, showing him how to seat himself and how to put his feet on the pedals.
I did catch one spelling mistake - it's 'eighth', not 'eigth' - but otherwise, pretty good grammar, too!
I look forward to seeing new stories from you. (:
~ Dream
4/2/2009 c1
7PiNkBuN17
Aw how cute!
InuYasha trys to ride the bike yet he still can't. Poor Guy!
Great Story!

Aw how cute!
InuYasha trys to ride the bike yet he still can't. Poor Guy!
Great Story!
3/31/2009 c1
3Handwritten
Very nice oneshot :) I loved the thought of Inuyasha trying to ride the bike (can't you picture them using that as a filler episode? xD)
Original and cute ^-^ excellent job!

Very nice oneshot :) I loved the thought of Inuyasha trying to ride the bike (can't you picture them using that as a filler episode? xD)
Original and cute ^-^ excellent job!
3/29/2009 c1 df
You know after reading your story I've tried again and again and a countlss number of times to imaGine Inuyasha wearing his fudal era clothes, trying to ride Kagome's bike, and you know what I just simply cannot see it. LOL =D
You know after reading your story I've tried again and again and a countlss number of times to imaGine Inuyasha wearing his fudal era clothes, trying to ride Kagome's bike, and you know what I just simply cannot see it. LOL =D