for The Beautiful Rose6/19/2013 c4 PhantomPhan97
Please update!
Please update!
3/12/2013 c4 Everyonedeserveslove
Really good! I just wish you could update quicker... :( LOL but eh.. it is life
Really good! I just wish you could update quicker... :( LOL but eh.. it is life
3/12/2013 c4 
23Irene Sharda
This was pretty good, all except for one thing...sigh, I see you went for the stupid, reckless Christine this time. I know you want to combine both Belle and Christine, but could you please lean more to Belle than Christine? Her just rushing out into the middle of the storm for no other reason than a feeling? Stealing Raoul's horse and coat? Really, Christine? Just because of a feeling? You'd feel pretty dumb if your dad was perfectly fine at an inn now wouldn't you?
The only reason Belle went to find her father was because she had actual EVIDENCE that he had run into foul play. Think before you act Christy! Keep a clear head on those shoulders.
I think what happened is that you made the mistake of wanting to hurry the plot along and get our two main leads together. However, in trying to do that, you made the mistake of short-changing Christine's character development. Try to take things a little more slowly next time, even if it mean writing a longer chapter or making Christine and Erik meet in the next chapter. You should never try to rush the plot, especially at the cost of your characters. It will go wrong for you every time if you do.
23Irene ShardaThis was pretty good, all except for one thing...sigh, I see you went for the stupid, reckless Christine this time. I know you want to combine both Belle and Christine, but could you please lean more to Belle than Christine? Her just rushing out into the middle of the storm for no other reason than a feeling? Stealing Raoul's horse and coat? Really, Christine? Just because of a feeling? You'd feel pretty dumb if your dad was perfectly fine at an inn now wouldn't you?
The only reason Belle went to find her father was because she had actual EVIDENCE that he had run into foul play. Think before you act Christy! Keep a clear head on those shoulders.
I think what happened is that you made the mistake of wanting to hurry the plot along and get our two main leads together. However, in trying to do that, you made the mistake of short-changing Christine's character development. Try to take things a little more slowly next time, even if it mean writing a longer chapter or making Christine and Erik meet in the next chapter. You should never try to rush the plot, especially at the cost of your characters. It will go wrong for you every time if you do.
3/12/2013 c4 Avenger Of The Impala
I love it so far. Very nice. Good way to start out the story. Funny how you just ended it right there when Erik comes in lol. But I can't wait till your next chapter
I love it so far. Very nice. Good way to start out the story. Funny how you just ended it right there when Erik comes in lol. But I can't wait till your next chapter
3/11/2013 c4 17Fumm95
I definitely hear the POTO theme in the background. Like, every time he shows up unexpectedly, like at the end of Masquerade.
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!
17Fumm95I definitely hear the POTO theme in the background. Like, every time he shows up unexpectedly, like at the end of Masquerade.
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!
3/11/2013 c4 thegeyerguesthoouse
It feels great to see this story update! I'm so glad you found inspiration, and I can't wait until the next chapter! You know, it's true that the 'confrontation' deserves it's own chapter! This is awesome!
Seriously, though, I'm ecstatic!
:)
It feels great to see this story update! I'm so glad you found inspiration, and I can't wait until the next chapter! You know, it's true that the 'confrontation' deserves it's own chapter! This is awesome!
Seriously, though, I'm ecstatic!
:)
2/14/2013 c3 thegeyerguesthoouse
Wow, that was awesome! Love cynical Erik!
This should be awesome... Can't wait for Erik and Christine to meet!
Wow, that was awesome! Love cynical Erik!
This should be awesome... Can't wait for Erik and Christine to meet!
1/26/2013 c3 newbornphanatic
i actually kinda had it coming because well, this story does remind me of the movie beauty and the beast, yet again i'am very suprised that armand was nice! anyway i want to know what happens next but to tell you the truth i just want christine and erik to meet already so UPDATE QUICK PLEASE!
i actually kinda had it coming because well, this story does remind me of the movie beauty and the beast, yet again i'am very suprised that armand was nice! anyway i want to know what happens next but to tell you the truth i just want christine and erik to meet already so UPDATE QUICK PLEASE!
1/26/2013 c3 1Everyonedeserveslove
really good! I just hope it doesnt take a year to update! PLEASE update SOON!
1Everyonedeserveslovereally good! I just hope it doesnt take a year to update! PLEASE update SOON!
1/8/2013 c2 6Phanatic01
Wow, this looks like it could be really good! I see from the previous reviews that this a re-write? Too bad I didn't read it before!:) I love your writing style and characterisations of everyone, especially Christine! I also think that Beauty and The Beast captures the spirt of Phantom Of The Opera scarily well, can't wait to read more. Update!:)
6Phanatic01Wow, this looks like it could be really good! I see from the previous reviews that this a re-write? Too bad I didn't read it before!:) I love your writing style and characterisations of everyone, especially Christine! I also think that Beauty and The Beast captures the spirt of Phantom Of The Opera scarily well, can't wait to read more. Update!:)