Reviews: First Word Mix Up

6/30/2020 c1 Guest
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5/17/2010 c1

29Lupa Dracolis
Jam? Not hardly. But delicious :) And poor Lily! Why is it that 'mummy' is the first word anyway? Why not 'daddy'? It's not fair!... not that I'm a dad, or indeed male. But still, why always 'mummy'?

11/1/2009 c1

1cawarlord
you got you character wrong there are 2 lilys you picked harry's daughter not his mother

4/23/2009 c1

2hunnyx
this is really cute

i feel like more people would appreciate it though if you corrected a few grammar bits, and it is spelled "lily" but i really enjoyed it, very adorable

4/6/2009 c1

5cheesetaco
lol loved it! hilarious! ;)

3/29/2009 c1

2KlainePotter
that was hilarious!

3/29/2009 c1 Little Bug 1024
Okay so whats a Marmite?