for A Love Story: In 26 Parts3/27/2014 c2 whiteblue2912
My gosh, I just love everything about this! James is so fantastically written as a fifth year, his date bribery, calling lily back, just everything felt so rightfully him. Also I really liked the scene; Lily thinking things were changing and then James being a idiot again, and James saying he didn't save severus for her. Anyways, thank you for the lovely story!
My gosh, I just love everything about this! James is so fantastically written as a fifth year, his date bribery, calling lily back, just everything felt so rightfully him. Also I really liked the scene; Lily thinking things were changing and then James being a idiot again, and James saying he didn't save severus for her. Anyways, thank you for the lovely story!
3/16/2013 c4 
44Ansy Pansy aka Panz
This was really funny and I liked seeing a different sort of relationship between them with the teasing but awkwardness at the same time.
One thing, you have Lily choke on a leaf of her salad at the wedding question and then a moment later pop another piece of cake in her mouth! Which sounds like she's eating lettuce and cake together!
44Ansy Pansy aka PanzThis was really funny and I liked seeing a different sort of relationship between them with the teasing but awkwardness at the same time.
One thing, you have Lily choke on a leaf of her salad at the wedding question and then a moment later pop another piece of cake in her mouth! Which sounds like she's eating lettuce and cake together!
3/16/2013 c3 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Cute, but you managed to add a bit of something so it wasn't just that
Cute, but you managed to add a bit of something so it wasn't just that
3/16/2013 c2 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Really like this, think you captured their interaction perfectly. I'd be jnterested to find out more about your take on the boys dealing with that whole thing, and your choice to not have it affect their friendship.
Really like this, think you captured their interaction perfectly. I'd be jnterested to find out more about your take on the boys dealing with that whole thing, and your choice to not have it affect their friendship.
3/16/2013 c1 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Aww so cute and perfectly them. But only 4?! I hope life lets you continue this sometime xx
Aww so cute and perfectly them. But only 4?! I hope life lets you continue this sometime xx
11/23/2010 c1 jcecullen
i really love this story!
please update soon, I am really looking forward to what you have to write :)
i really love this story!
please update soon, I am really looking forward to what you have to write :)
6/22/2010 c4 6teenagewitch94
Loved this one too! You are one of my favourite authors :) Please update soon. xoxo tw94
6teenagewitch94Loved this one too! You are one of my favourite authors :) Please update soon. xoxo tw94
6/11/2010 c4 mart
yeah, you updated! Ok, as promised (assuming you did read my llast review..):
Delightful!
isn't that nice? Loved the light (though sometimes tense) atmosphere.
E for Early huh? hmm, let's hope your update is Early too! (:
yeah, you updated! Ok, as promised (assuming you did read my llast review..):
Delightful!
isn't that nice? Loved the light (though sometimes tense) atmosphere.
E for Early huh? hmm, let's hope your update is Early too! (:
6/11/2010 c1 b.a
You had such a good idea. And you write very well. i really like it.
You had such a good idea. And you write very well. i really like it.
6/11/2010 c4 3ShadowGoblet21
I'm so glad you updated! I love your writing. The interaction between James and Lily was sweet and just the way I imagine it would have been. I hope you update soon!
3ShadowGoblet21I'm so glad you updated! I love your writing. The interaction between James and Lily was sweet and just the way I imagine it would have been. I hope you update soon!