
6/13/2014 c6 bvbgirl
please update
please update
6/26/2009 c5
3synjax
"UNCLE JIM"?
oh my god.
~KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! ^^
~ME LURVES YA! ^^

"UNCLE JIM"?
oh my god.
~KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! ^^
~ME LURVES YA! ^^
6/26/2009 c5
12amieofabc
AHH! SO FUNY! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THE OOC CORNER! *bows down to laptop as friends back away slowly* ROCK ON! WOHO! :)

AHH! SO FUNY! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THE OOC CORNER! *bows down to laptop as friends back away slowly* ROCK ON! WOHO! :)
6/24/2009 c5 ERIN LLOYD
OMS (oh my sylar), I adore it. please write more when you can. I love the whole sylaire thing! Swoon! Keep up the great work! :D
OMS (oh my sylar), I adore it. please write more when you can. I love the whole sylaire thing! Swoon! Keep up the great work! :D
6/24/2009 c5 newt gayszler
that was good. i love the little beginning and end parts where you have conversations with the characters. they're hilarious!
that was good. i love the little beginning and end parts where you have conversations with the characters. they're hilarious!
6/24/2009 c4 minimi37818
LOL!
'Peter: Stop! I am the hero and the hero must save!'
'Everyone:...WTF'
I love it!
LOL!
'Peter: Stop! I am the hero and the hero must save!'
'Everyone:...WTF'
I love it!
6/21/2009 c4
19ellequoi
This story has an interesting concept and I like how it's going. I'm impressed that you can write as well as you can in the 8th grade. I think the chapters should be longer, though.
Also, I usually don't like "OOC corner" type Author's Notes, but these ones ended up making me laugh, so good job.

This story has an interesting concept and I like how it's going. I'm impressed that you can write as well as you can in the 8th grade. I think the chapters should be longer, though.
Also, I usually don't like "OOC corner" type Author's Notes, but these ones ended up making me laugh, so good job.
6/8/2009 c4 silverdust124
hey, thank you for updating, this story is good, please write more soon
hey, thank you for updating, this story is good, please write more soon
6/7/2009 c4 phantomluver8749
yay an update!
please continue, I really like
this story!
and i'm sorry to hear about
all of your testing/projects
I have final exams tomorrow
and I know studying sucks
yay an update!
please continue, I really like
this story!
and i'm sorry to hear about
all of your testing/projects
I have final exams tomorrow
and I know studying sucks