for Denial Is Not A Pretty Facial Feature7/3/2010 c21 
1amsev
I love this story! Love marriage law fics, and loved reading their growing closer. I cried over Little Thing. Not much into little ones myself, but that was so incredibly sad.
Very nicely written.
1amsevI love this story! Love marriage law fics, and loved reading their growing closer. I cried over Little Thing. Not much into little ones myself, but that was so incredibly sad.
Very nicely written.
7/2/2010 c13 jamie
hi! i'm a new reviewer. love the story and please continue with haste ;) ! here's a little rhyme i conjured up about draco aka my husband
draco malfoy do me good
surprise me with some morning wood
oh my is that your wand?
dragon string and i'm far gone
please do, shed those robes
every remnant of your clothes
hair so blonde, face so hot
ginger weasley and harry pott
compare not to your _ _ _ _
hi! i'm a new reviewer. love the story and please continue with haste ;) ! here's a little rhyme i conjured up about draco aka my husband
draco malfoy do me good
surprise me with some morning wood
oh my is that your wand?
dragon string and i'm far gone
please do, shed those robes
every remnant of your clothes
hair so blonde, face so hot
ginger weasley and harry pott
compare not to your _ _ _ _
6/30/2010 c21 Nicole3
Absolutley, incredibly, stupendously brilliant. EPILOGUE PLEASE.
This story had me sobbing and laughing and just falling in love with Draco's character.
I sighed with contempment as he asked her out, ad how did the joke with the banshee end? ;)
you should have a one-shot epilogue on the side for those who want one and those who don't want it can just... Not... Read it? :P I love your stories Madame. :) please keep writing.
Nicole,
Absolutley, incredibly, stupendously brilliant. EPILOGUE PLEASE.
This story had me sobbing and laughing and just falling in love with Draco's character.
I sighed with contempment as he asked her out, ad how did the joke with the banshee end? ;)
you should have a one-shot epilogue on the side for those who want one and those who don't want it can just... Not... Read it? :P I love your stories Madame. :) please keep writing.
Nicole,
6/29/2010 c21 4Cinnamon Selkie
~His quizzical expression quickly disappeared as Hermione was cut short. The door burst open and Harry, along with a large entourage, piled into the room.~
Hmm, that *is* unusual. Draco got there to save the day before Harry did :D
~"Intermingling."
"Exactly."
A tense moment ticked past. "Lucius Malfoy, I'd like a divorce."~
*Bursts out laughing* Oh wow. I think I just fell a little bit in love with Narcissa. She was BRILLIANT.
~His father was before him in a flash, his wand pressed deep into the side of Draco's throat. "How dare you disrespect the Malfoy name? That filth will never be a Malfoy."
Well really, what choice did he have at that point but to withdraw his wand and start blindly shooting spells?~
Oh dear. Too much exposure to Gryffindors, I'd say. That was NOT a sensible thing to do.
~Her thought patterns were disrupted when the door opened again and Draco stood in the middle of the doorway, his hair a mess and his cheeks tinged with pink.
"Are you alright?"
"Will you…" he paused. "Will you go on a date with me tomorrow night?"~
Aaww...
~It was four minutes past seven.
She'd decided not to show.~
Oh that's so cute. Draco's nervous too :)
Love this phrase:
~the ultimate feeling of declarative love in the air~
A very beautiful final chapter. Normally I am all in favor of epilogues, but this actually feels like the perfect place to leave this story. Thank you for the best Dramione story I have read in a long time. Cinnamon.
4Cinnamon Selkie~His quizzical expression quickly disappeared as Hermione was cut short. The door burst open and Harry, along with a large entourage, piled into the room.~
Hmm, that *is* unusual. Draco got there to save the day before Harry did :D
~"Intermingling."
"Exactly."
A tense moment ticked past. "Lucius Malfoy, I'd like a divorce."~
*Bursts out laughing* Oh wow. I think I just fell a little bit in love with Narcissa. She was BRILLIANT.
~His father was before him in a flash, his wand pressed deep into the side of Draco's throat. "How dare you disrespect the Malfoy name? That filth will never be a Malfoy."
Well really, what choice did he have at that point but to withdraw his wand and start blindly shooting spells?~
Oh dear. Too much exposure to Gryffindors, I'd say. That was NOT a sensible thing to do.
~Her thought patterns were disrupted when the door opened again and Draco stood in the middle of the doorway, his hair a mess and his cheeks tinged with pink.
"Are you alright?"
"Will you…" he paused. "Will you go on a date with me tomorrow night?"~
Aaww...
~It was four minutes past seven.
She'd decided not to show.~
Oh that's so cute. Draco's nervous too :)
Love this phrase:
~the ultimate feeling of declarative love in the air~
A very beautiful final chapter. Normally I am all in favor of epilogues, but this actually feels like the perfect place to leave this story. Thank you for the best Dramione story I have read in a long time. Cinnamon.
6/29/2010 c20 Cinnamon Selkie
Narcissa did good. And Lucius is an idiot who needs to move on but probably never will.
Oh dear. What's up with Ron?
I'm glad that Hermione's gradually getting back on her feet. She'll probably always feel the loss, but-as cliche as this is-life goes on.
~Over tea, Draco frowned. "Do you think father's had a hand in anything that's been happening?"~
Aha! Clever Draco. I was wondering how long it would be before he caught on to that.
Lucius is an evil, evil man. He really is. And also, I think, more than a little mad.
~From the outside, it looked like Draco was the one holding her together but everyone had it wrong. Holding Hermione together was the only thing gluing him in place; he was the holder of her grief and her pain and nothing he had ever achieved in his existence had meant as much as being there for her.~
Oh. That's beautiful. Cinnamon.
Narcissa did good. And Lucius is an idiot who needs to move on but probably never will.
Oh dear. What's up with Ron?
I'm glad that Hermione's gradually getting back on her feet. She'll probably always feel the loss, but-as cliche as this is-life goes on.
~Over tea, Draco frowned. "Do you think father's had a hand in anything that's been happening?"~
Aha! Clever Draco. I was wondering how long it would be before he caught on to that.
Lucius is an evil, evil man. He really is. And also, I think, more than a little mad.
~From the outside, it looked like Draco was the one holding her together but everyone had it wrong. Holding Hermione together was the only thing gluing him in place; he was the holder of her grief and her pain and nothing he had ever achieved in his existence had meant as much as being there for her.~
Oh. That's beautiful. Cinnamon.
6/29/2010 c21 Suri
Haha! i totally loved it! well done!
Haha! i totally loved it! well done!
6/26/2010 c21 1RiverRamsden
This seriously is my most favorite Dramione story. It's been such a pleasure reading your work. I'm so glad I could be part of the journey with you. I only wish I'd of read it sooner. :) It's been great though. I'm so sad that its over but I hope that we'll get some new stuff soon. -keeps fingers crossed- I was teary at the end I'll admit. LOL.
Beautiful line :)
"Granger, has anyone ever told you that denial is not a pretty facial feature?"
1RiverRamsdenThis seriously is my most favorite Dramione story. It's been such a pleasure reading your work. I'm so glad I could be part of the journey with you. I only wish I'd of read it sooner. :) It's been great though. I'm so sad that its over but I hope that we'll get some new stuff soon. -keeps fingers crossed- I was teary at the end I'll admit. LOL.
Beautiful line :)
"Granger, has anyone ever told you that denial is not a pretty facial feature?"
6/26/2010 c21 Rosali
I definetly think you should have an epilogue! I absoulutely LOVED this story! It was awesome! =D
I definetly think you should have an epilogue! I absoulutely LOVED this story! It was awesome! =D
6/24/2010 c21 bookworm62442
Well, I've been extremely late in my previous reviews, haven't I? I do apologize. I've been sucked into the vortex of something called "life." :P But OMG, you actually finished the story? And what a lovely ending it was! I honestly think it was my favorite chapter out of the story, and it really...I don't know, I'm at a loss for words. It tied up loose ends? I loved how Hermione and Draco finally went on a first date, and haha finally admitted their love for each other. Oh, and I loved how we saw Narcissa's transformation from evil mother-in-law to getting along with Hermione. I look forward to any other stories you might have in the near future. :D
Well, I've been extremely late in my previous reviews, haven't I? I do apologize. I've been sucked into the vortex of something called "life." :P But OMG, you actually finished the story? And what a lovely ending it was! I honestly think it was my favorite chapter out of the story, and it really...I don't know, I'm at a loss for words. It tied up loose ends? I loved how Hermione and Draco finally went on a first date, and haha finally admitted their love for each other. Oh, and I loved how we saw Narcissa's transformation from evil mother-in-law to getting along with Hermione. I look forward to any other stories you might have in the near future. :D
6/24/2010 c21 Akashia
Loved it! I read tons of Dramione fics and this has got to be one of the better ones:-) Although I must admit Lucuis was a right pompous git lol Loved the chemistry build up and break down between Draco and Hermions and the humor had me in stitches :-)
Awsome Work!
Loved it! I read tons of Dramione fics and this has got to be one of the better ones:-) Although I must admit Lucuis was a right pompous git lol Loved the chemistry build up and break down between Draco and Hermions and the humor had me in stitches :-)
Awsome Work!
6/23/2010 c21 8Ninja Goldfish
Absolutely perfect story. I loved it. It made me laugh and it made me cry. You got both their personalities fabulously, I thought. Personally, I would love to read an epilogue... But as you are the writer, it is entirely up to you. Happy writing! :)
8Ninja GoldfishAbsolutely perfect story. I loved it. It made me laugh and it made me cry. You got both their personalities fabulously, I thought. Personally, I would love to read an epilogue... But as you are the writer, it is entirely up to you. Happy writing! :)
6/23/2010 c21 2malfoymaiden
THAT WAS SO SWEEEEEEEEET
this made my sqeual out loud:
"Draco stood in the middle of the doorway, his hair a mess and his cheeks tinged with pink.
"Are you alright?"
"Will you…" he paused. "Will you go on a date with me tomorrow night?"
I JUST ABOUT MELTED!
and their date, oh gosh. in the eiffel tower. using the title in the line. oh that was SO BRILLIANT. THIS ALL WAS SO BRILLIANT! CONGRATULATIONS!
i love this fic sooooo much. you made my day. and i want an epilogue, although this is probably too late. lol. much love!
2malfoymaidenTHAT WAS SO SWEEEEEEEEET
this made my sqeual out loud:
"Draco stood in the middle of the doorway, his hair a mess and his cheeks tinged with pink.
"Are you alright?"
"Will you…" he paused. "Will you go on a date with me tomorrow night?"
I JUST ABOUT MELTED!
and their date, oh gosh. in the eiffel tower. using the title in the line. oh that was SO BRILLIANT. THIS ALL WAS SO BRILLIANT! CONGRATULATIONS!
i love this fic sooooo much. you made my day. and i want an epilogue, although this is probably too late. lol. much love!