for Origins of a Pirate6/25/2009 c12 majorbookluver
hehehe "ragtag bunch of lowlife's" interesting description... anyway, so short! need more! i especially liked Cut's part, very well written. anyway, UPDATE SOON! OR I WILL GET YOU!
hehehe "ragtag bunch of lowlife's" interesting description... anyway, so short! need more! i especially liked Cut's part, very well written. anyway, UPDATE SOON! OR I WILL GET YOU!
6/17/2009 c12 
4Oceangoddess
Don't worry about it, take as long as you need. Wow, Cutler is a very ambitious person. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
4OceangoddessDon't worry about it, take as long as you need. Wow, Cutler is a very ambitious person. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
5/24/2009 c11 10SpoonfulOfArsenic
lol "He sighed as he took one more look towards the small graveyard in which his mother’s body (minus the head) had been buried."
10SpoonfulOfArseniclol "He sighed as he took one more look towards the small graveyard in which his mother’s body (minus the head) had been buried."
5/24/2009 c11 4Oceangoddess
That's okay. Take as long as you need to update, it's better to have a good chapter done slowly than a crappy chapter done quickly. I wonder how Jack and Ginny will adjust to being pirates? And what has Beckett been up to? Can't wait for the next chapter :D
4OceangoddessThat's okay. Take as long as you need to update, it's better to have a good chapter done slowly than a crappy chapter done quickly. I wonder how Jack and Ginny will adjust to being pirates? And what has Beckett been up to? Can't wait for the next chapter :D
5/11/2009 c10 10SpoonfulOfArsenic
"Oh Jack it's so pretty!" lol Yeah, Jack looks so incredibly "pretty". :)
10SpoonfulOfArsenic"Oh Jack it's so pretty!" lol Yeah, Jack looks so incredibly "pretty". :)
5/11/2009 c10 4Oceangoddess
Ooh, the origin of the infamous bandana! Lol, Jack was embarrassed about wearing a woman's shawl. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter :D
4OceangoddessOoh, the origin of the infamous bandana! Lol, Jack was embarrassed about wearing a woman's shawl. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter :D
5/11/2009 c10 81steelneena
i loved it, and it was nice to get an update from something. I act like him too much as well, you're not alone. I've quoted him more than anyone else!
81steelneenai loved it, and it was nice to get an update from something. I act like him too much as well, you're not alone. I've quoted him more than anyone else!
5/11/2009 c10 majorbookluver
Oh no! poor cut! Did Jack have to cut the shawl for it to work as a bandana? he he he... I can just see Jacks face... I can also guess that it was about as awkward as a cheesy turtle butt for him to be looking through girl's clothing... What did they decide to do with Ginny? Update NOW! I COMMAND THEE! GO FORTH AND UPDATE THIS INSTANT! pretty please?
Oh no! poor cut! Did Jack have to cut the shawl for it to work as a bandana? he he he... I can just see Jacks face... I can also guess that it was about as awkward as a cheesy turtle butt for him to be looking through girl's clothing... What did they decide to do with Ginny? Update NOW! I COMMAND THEE! GO FORTH AND UPDATE THIS INSTANT! pretty please?
5/5/2009 c9 majorbookluver
Oh no! Poor Cut! Poor Jack! Poor Ginny!BO TEAGUE! Teague made me ANGRY! Yay for Jack, i like how you made him join because he was saving his sister, not because he was just that low. UPDATE NOW! please?
Oh no! Poor Cut! Poor Jack! Poor Ginny!BO TEAGUE! Teague made me ANGRY! Yay for Jack, i like how you made him join because he was saving his sister, not because he was just that low. UPDATE NOW! please?
5/5/2009 c9 4Oceangoddess
OMG! Please tell me that Ginny isn't going to become a prostitue! She's only seven! How can Teague even think that? I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter :D
4OceangoddessOMG! Please tell me that Ginny isn't going to become a prostitue! She's only seven! How can Teague even think that? I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter :D
4/28/2009 c8 10SpoonfulOfArsenic
Gosh, I haven't gotten to reading this lately! :( Anyway, really love it so far! It's really amazing that you actually looked up how to shrink heads! :)
10SpoonfulOfArsenicGosh, I haven't gotten to reading this lately! :( Anyway, really love it so far! It's really amazing that you actually looked up how to shrink heads! :)
4/28/2009 c8 2sereneflower
Wow, Edward Teague just seems to get more messed up every chapter. And you looked up how to shrink a head. Wow. They need money and they're going to pirates. Is this how Jack finds his dream job? Keep it up, eagerly waiting for the next installment.
2sereneflowerWow, Edward Teague just seems to get more messed up every chapter. And you looked up how to shrink a head. Wow. They need money and they're going to pirates. Is this how Jack finds his dream job? Keep it up, eagerly waiting for the next installment.
4/28/2009 c8 majorbookluver
that was so good! Poor Cut! he's only 10 right? how does one go about joining a pirate ship? just come on and say, hey i want to join? anyway, i thought that the part with Jack and his dad was really well done, i can see that happening. Hehehe, what do you know of pirates? I love that line... update soon!
that was so good! Poor Cut! he's only 10 right? how does one go about joining a pirate ship? just come on and say, hey i want to join? anyway, i thought that the part with Jack and his dad was really well done, i can see that happening. Hehehe, what do you know of pirates? I love that line... update soon!