
4/9/2009 c1
8DitzyBrunette89
I love it
Lash and Magenta are an awsome paring to bad there arnt to many stories about them out there.

I love it
Lash and Magenta are an awsome paring to bad there arnt to many stories about them out there.
4/6/2009 c1
4Ayluy
Lash?
Ahahaha, I really didn't see that one coming *feels stupid* I mean, caramel eyes? I _should_ have known. Bah.
Anyway, I like the way you write, and the idea of Maj and Lash having a secret relationship is interesting. Still, I think you could've added a bit of Maj's smartass-y sarcasm (or whatever you like to call it :) ) at the end. But I guess that's more a question of taste.
Nice work :]

Lash?
Ahahaha, I really didn't see that one coming *feels stupid* I mean, caramel eyes? I _should_ have known. Bah.
Anyway, I like the way you write, and the idea of Maj and Lash having a secret relationship is interesting. Still, I think you could've added a bit of Maj's smartass-y sarcasm (or whatever you like to call it :) ) at the end. But I guess that's more a question of taste.
Nice work :]