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11/16/2010 c1 PSG1JOHN
Very good start i like this AU you made with Jesse, and now you can add a new plot line to this, the chase and end to Jesse.

I didn't like how fast they made John find out in the show with Jesse flash backs, and they didn't show John following Riley in the older esp. He just one day followed her with out us knowing.

If you pick this up again i hope she goes out with a bang like in "In the Hands of an Angry Machine" by JMHthe3rd

In that story Jesse with body armor gets lit up and ends up with a round in her arm/leg and in the end point bank head shot though her helmet.

Will doesn't have to be bloody but a little action is always good, will for me.
4/2/2009 c1 4VioletWinter830
please update again soon!
4/1/2009 c1 dc
its a great story hope u right more
3/31/2009 c1 D
I don't know what to think about this. This story is just a repeat of episodes with a little bit of internal dialogue.

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