for A Day Off5/16/2011 c1 
9SaraBahama
Nice, clean, sweet little piece. First date material :) -I like the twist at the end...that girl is wicked smart! Good job.
9SaraBahamaNice, clean, sweet little piece. First date material :) -I like the twist at the end...that girl is wicked smart! Good job.
3/31/2009 c1 135ALIMOO1971
great short story but... we know that if Say calls Jack 'sir' during the bet and loss what was Sam bet if Jack called her 'Carter' insteed of Sam, what would of been the bet?... keep up the good work
135ALIMOO1971great short story but... we know that if Say calls Jack 'sir' during the bet and loss what was Sam bet if Jack called her 'Carter' insteed of Sam, what would of been the bet?... keep up the good work
3/31/2009 c1 10iwrite4fun
That was amazing! Please tell me that you're going to write the fishing trip!
10iwrite4funThat was amazing! Please tell me that you're going to write the fishing trip!