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11/25/2011 c1 4Blood Russian
Thanks for the many many laughs. ;D
2/8/2011 c1 28ihrtryoma
hahahahahahahahaha "and then he started snoring" that's funny
9/21/2010 c1 43potterlockedintheshire
That was really funny, espically the end! Great job!
1/29/2010 c1 1infinite grey
Oh, this was an interesting fic! I loved it!

“Whatever.” Two-Bit yawned, laid down on his bunk, closed his eyes and fell asleep, or passed out, or died, or something

** This line totally wrapped the whole thing together. Well written!

Jamie
1/18/2010 c1 5gumdropj
Heehee, that was funny. I know what my favorite line is... "Your mom, Two-Bit. I jumped your mom." I dunno, it's catchy! Poor Dallas Winston, having to spend the night with a drunk Two-Bit.

The end was great. ;)
1/13/2010 c1 1mo lei tau
HAHAHAHAHA! HILARIOUS! XD loved it so much! Go Two bit!
8/26/2009 c1 9writersblock242
“Your mom, Two-Bit. I jumped your mom.” -Best. Line. Ever!

I was really waiting for Dallas to strangle Two-Bit. I bet he would too.
8/22/2009 c1 Dozer
That was great. Everyone's going to stay in jail for man slaughter as annoying as Two-Bit is.
7/29/2009 c1 21samaryley
I can’t believe I never reviewed this. Bad beta; bad, bad beta.

First of all, I love how Dally doesn’t know or care why he’s in jail. Very amusing.

As for myself, well, me and Soda were doing cartwheels down the streets…you know, those handstands and stuff Darry taught the rest of us while you watched?

** I like how you tied this into canon. Nice.

There’s good whistling, bad whistling, and then there’s Two-Bit’s whistling.

** I have a feeling you could substitute any verb for “whistling” in this sentence, and it would still be true. Two-Bit does just seem to have his own way of doing things.

“Your mom, Two-Bit. I jumped your mom.”

**This wise-ass remark just makes me laugh every single time.

And yeah, your last line is classic.

That was a perfect one-shot for April Fool’s Good Fic Day.
7/27/2009 c1 7TheNightimeSky
Haha - how can someone hate ol' Two-Bit? Ah, silly Dallas: just give in to him, you really can't win ... it's probably because he's a wee bit insane (and drunk; that always helps). No sense making sense of insane people.

Good job - I liked it a lot.

-TNS
4/3/2009 c1 5Lime Green Lioness
LMAO that was some funny shit! "Your mom, Two-bit. I jumped your mom"
4/2/2009 c1 24DEACTIVEDUSER
Two-Bit!You annoying ass!LOL. Two-Bit sure did sound normal...or drunk.Oh well.Never could tell which. ;D Great job on this!Hilarious!
4/1/2009 c1 1White Lion 18
happy good fic day! You always write good stuff!
4/1/2009 c1 daydreambeliever95
This was great! I couldn't stop laughing.

It was incredibly well-written and Dal and Two-Bit were in character.

I applaud it!

Keep Writing!
4/1/2009 c1 12ThatGreenElephant
"And then he started snoring."

Go Two-Bit! I agree with Extreme Writer, it was perfect for April Fools Day!
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