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5/25/2009 c5 ferocmope
a little choppy, the writing.

it seems like you wanted to it flush out fast and you didn't take too much time on it. slow it down a little. a little more detail, between your dialogue, and you're good to go.

cool idea.
5/8/2009 c2 8JazisCharmed
I like the story, but the format is a little weird.
5/5/2009 c5 jayde
no offense but this is bad
4/10/2009 c3 5missypaige06
good start keep it coming :) i love all the paige and henry stuff - i think being the youngest its realistic that she wont cope very well
4/5/2009 c1 Jillian3
i really like it you should write more!

xxoo

Jill

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