for Harry Potter and the Gift of Magic6/10/2013 c3 
34TheBeardedOne
Interesting start to the story, quite a bit of potential... but no updates in four years?
Sigh... another dead fic... pity.
34TheBeardedOneInteresting start to the story, quite a bit of potential... but no updates in four years?
Sigh... another dead fic... pity.
11/18/2012 c1 Ranmaleopard
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
9/27/2012 c2 1Obsessive Consumptive Reader
Eh...i like it. Unique perspective but one thing in particular.
Mote means Might or May. It does not, has not, and will never mean Shall.
So mote it be "It might be that way" NOT "So shall it be"
1Obsessive Consumptive ReaderEh...i like it. Unique perspective but one thing in particular.
Mote means Might or May. It does not, has not, and will never mean Shall.
So mote it be "It might be that way" NOT "So shall it be"
9/8/2012 c2 Guest
this is very well written, please update
this is very well written, please update
9/8/2012 c3 Guest
update please,
update please,
9/8/2012 c2 Guest
update
update
10/30/2011 c3 5dezagonj
I know you haven't written a whole lot and maybe you've announced somewhere that you're not continuing the story, but I just wanted to comment that the story is quite good and if you were to continue writing it I'd certainly love to read more of it.
5dezagonjI know you haven't written a whole lot and maybe you've announced somewhere that you're not continuing the story, but I just wanted to comment that the story is quite good and if you were to continue writing it I'd certainly love to read more of it.
10/21/2011 c3 22Katzztar
quote= "The rumor is that the Weasley's just broke their current curse of poverty and male children, cursed by a Malfoy sorcerer ten generations ago."
Interesting, I suppose the braking of thecurse it by Ginny's birth? Dos the breaking 'poverty curse' mean that they would be so bad off in this? Another interesting thing is the good things coming from the self-sacrifice...it makes me think of Lily's sacrifice andthe protection it gave to Harry until Voldie used his blood to resurect into a new body.
22Katzztarquote= "The rumor is that the Weasley's just broke their current curse of poverty and male children, cursed by a Malfoy sorcerer ten generations ago."
Interesting, I suppose the braking of thecurse it by Ginny's birth? Dos the breaking 'poverty curse' mean that they would be so bad off in this? Another interesting thing is the good things coming from the self-sacrifice...it makes me think of Lily's sacrifice andthe protection it gave to Harry until Voldie used his blood to resurect into a new body.
10/21/2011 c1 Katzztar
quote= "...(to young, definitely to young)."
That should be 'too' not 'to'. As I go through the chapters I see this mistake a few other times, like in ch 3 when Ameila is talking to the healer.
quote= "...(to young, definitely to young)."
That should be 'too' not 'to'. As I go through the chapters I see this mistake a few other times, like in ch 3 when Ameila is talking to the healer.
4/21/2011 c3 ILoveGeorgeEads
i loved it.i can't wait for more.i can't wait to see Dumbles reaction when he finds out that he is living with Amelia and Susan Bones.that Harry and Susan are soul bound.
i loved it.i can't wait for more.i can't wait to see Dumbles reaction when he finds out that he is living with Amelia and Susan Bones.that Harry and Susan are soul bound.