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10/9/2019 c8 Izanami118
Duuude the plan with the umbrella was epic fail xD
8/7/2018 c21 misakiboo169
I'm rereading it again and I have to say I still love the ending and why did Tezuka have to smoke whyyy
10/20/2017 c9 misakiboo169
WHYYYY did Tezuka have to smoke WHYYYYY ;~; :~:
4/17/2016 c21 yuki22hime
what a lovely story
12/4/2015 c21 Guest
I love the ending...just please edit this to at least make the grammar better!
12/4/2015 c16 Guest
A church wedding? I thought it was a secret wedding and the proper wedding would be when they turned twenty and where was saeki during the wedding and tokugawa
12/4/2015 c15 Guest
It's decided, they were meant to be! Because...

1) they were already bethroted even before they were born

2) they met by chance when they were five years old and fell in love

3) and lastly...they found each other again and still in love

:D
12/4/2015 c12 Guest
Hey! Shiraishi had white or silver hair not brown...and at first i thought tokugawa likes saeki...
12/4/2015 c8 Guest
Inui's plan with the umbrella was hilarious how it failed hahaha
12/4/2015 c7 Guest
Kyaaa! They were childhood sweetheart!
7/19/2013 c1 2VaneUchihaWacabayashi
kiuuuuuuuut
9/15/2012 c2 24Nispedana
Again, the errors are nothing a simple read-through can't fix. Especially now that you have plenty of experience since you wrote this chap.

I have to say, though, that you should put in more things in a chapter. It would give us more things to review about, ne? I hope you will apply this to your other stories, but no pressure. Everyone has their own style.

Now for the actual fangirling:
- EHhhhh Tezuka's being... defensive? I wonder if he's just agitated because Fuji-chan's so cute. lol
9/15/2012 c1 Nispedana
This looks good! Found it in FB and decided to take a look. This is interesting.

I suggest a read-through though. You'll find quite a few mistakes. Example: "What is it Eiji ?" Fuji asked amusingly [This should be 'in amusement', unless you mean Fuji-chan is trying to amuse Eihi]. She liked the childish side of Kikumaru. It made her fresh. [this is supposed to be 'it made her FEEL fresh', unless she's an inanimate object that was given a bath of Eiji's presence]

Hope you didn't make them so OOC though. It's tolerable for me, but still...

In Lieu of this... since this is a completed story, is it alright with you if I review most (if not all) chapters? Some authors seem to dislike this. . I'm just saying these critiques for your future stories, i guess, if you do not want to edit this one anymore. :D

Good chap and I'm now off to the next chap
9/7/2012 c21 1SoraKing98
Awww This story is truly sweet I will definitely read the sequel
9/7/2012 c12 SoraKing98
Awwww I was like... KYAAHHH Romantic!
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